hey

i dont get it

like really i dont get it

like the beginning than everything is getting mess up to me

i like the others read it

dont get sum parts but i still like

Okay... um.. Please update? Anyway, Naruto is very OOC. Garaa too.

Awww, how sad and sorta cute. But the characters are a little OOC. You know Garaa acts like Naruto a little and visa versa. I like your story by the way.

Interesting.

heyy awwsome story! You should read mine (if you do go by my penname) the one for naruto and the new one that i'm making for inuyasha!

AWESOMENESS! i love love love it! oh ya! i read your profile and we are alot alike. same age same hair color and the things you post are almost identical to what i do. It scared the crap out of me! teehee well then arigatou for your review on 'the bi-polar twins Hinaki and Ookami' comments make me happy!~ CRAP I'M ON OOKAMI'S ACCOUNT! oops -_-'. OK THEN! this is OtakuAssasin or better known as Hinaki. Ja mata ne

If this is an AnimaNaruto crossover, please move it into the proper crossover section.

If it's just a Naruto story, you should probably move it there.

Interesting. I haven't heard of Anima but I really like the idea of Naruto being a dad. I've had that on my mind for a while now. So I'll check in again to see how that goes. First person stories are harder to write than third person as you probably already know and also have more trouble gaining popularity on fanfiction. Regardless I thought it was well done.

-yours truly theteacher