Oh man... This gotta be one of the saddest story I ever read. Great story though. Good job. Ty

This story happens to be the most amazing thing ever. I've read it five times because it's just so great. Your writing brings me joy. (:

Just read this whole story and I cried. This is a great story and connects with me personally. I was so sad this story finished I wish this story was endless

heartwarming and sad- what a wonderful story. Good job!

Woah
This was...amazing. Even more than that if possible. I loved how you made it seem so real, so raw. You had me crying at times after Max's death. I really love how you described how they lived, it was like I was feeling everything Alex was, it was amazing. Just everything, and Mitchie. God i loved how she always seemed to calm Alex down at her moods, she's the perfect girlfriend. And the end with Justin, I also loved that they went back to where they were before.
K that's it
I'm still very blown away by this story
Keep it up and you're an amazing , and I sooo want this to be a movie. I actually poctured it like the Hunger Games like were they lived in the beggining but yeah amazing

Okay, this is by far the weirdest AU story I've ever read, between Alex and the Russos being in some uber-religious cult instead of, yunno, wizards... It's just such a stretch! But Mitchie, Mitchie is definitely very interesting here, and I like how they are becoming friends despite the no-speech barrier, and I like the mysteriousness because my mind has already come up with like twelve different ideas of what caused Mitchie to become mute.

Where to start? The amazing storyline, the fantastic descriptions, the perfectly captured characters? I don't know. This is one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading, I read it all in a day hooked on every word on the screen. I truely felt a connection to these characters I felt Alex's pain and confusion, her anguish, her love for her brothers and of course Mitchie. It brought a lump to my throat several times and I'm not ashamed to admit it. My only dissapointment is the one where it took me almost three years after you had finished to discover it. I am still on a high from the feelings it's brought up especially in regards to my family and my feelings for them. Not to deviate from the review I can only say this is amazing once more before I shall send this off. Thank you for writing this masterpiece and that is 100% true, no exaggerations.

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I like this story so much that I have read it many times.

This is, by far, the greatest story I've ever read. It should be turned into an actual book. I read this in two days because I took no breaks other than eating, sleeping, and using the bathroom lol. That's how into this I was. SO incredible. I loved it. Thanks for writing such an amazing, well thought out story. You're an incredible writer.

I...I have so many words and thoughts and feelings that I wish to put into words without rambling.

This story...was absolutely fantastic! Amazing! Brilliant! Perfection!

It was just so good. You had been practically crying from every chapter since Max died, I think even a chapter or two before it. They way you wrote about Havenwood was amazing, it gave off a very realistic vibe and you (as a reader) could sympathize with the main characters as they good through all this pain and torture. Alex's way of thinking over everything always gave a hard impact on me. This story was incredibly better written off in first person instead of third person. It gave it a more personal feel and makes it easier for the readers to have an emotional response to what was going on in the story line.

I love the way you wrote how damn confused Alex and Mitichie were feeling and how Tom and Margaret attempt to explain and deal with the two girls. As said it was to read, Max's death tied this entire story together in an amazing, depressing, way.

I loooooooooooved this story. It was amazing.

Yeah, I hope this wasn't too rambly and I hope it was more professional like. But honestly, one of the best fanfictions (out of any fandom) I have ever read and I am positive those who will or have read this will agree with me!

I've read this story in the course of about 2-3 days, and I just wanna say "I LOVED IT!" The whole setting of the story just amazes me how you could come up with that... Daamn, haha. That was great :)

That was beautiul

I will definitely be rereading this

This this this just..justin..i i can't

SO MANY EMOTIONS DAMMIT

STUPID DAMIEN STUPID ROSSLYN DAMN THEM

oh..tears? In my eyes? Pfft i do not know what u r talking about

YEAH

GO MITCHIE

SO FREAKING BADASS

The last bit made me tear up a bit