Please continue

me gusta esta fanfic mas como anko intenta darle una nueva actitud a hinata, tenten ya piensa en su futuro y con la llegada de temari proximamente se dara una disputa entre temari y hinaka como la esposa alfa jajjaaja continualo esta grandiosa tu historia.

me gusta esta fanfic mas como anko intenta darle una nueva actitud a hinata, tenten ya piensa en su futuro y con la llegada de temari proximamente se dara una disputa entre temari y hinaka como la esposa alfa jajjaaja continualo esta grandiosa tu historia.

Yet another fic that, sadly, will never be continued. It's such a shame, because this takes a somewhat overused cliche-like idea (the whole forced marriage thing) and actually makes it INTERESTING instead of just an excuse for porn!

It makes me feel really awkward to want to see Ino and Sakura's eventual realisation of how terrible their so called 'relationship' is, even though that's essentially the same as wanting to see the outcome of statutory rape. I enjoy people getting their comeuppance as much as the next person, but the specific circumstances don't make it easy to appreciate!

This was so well written, especially for what seems like such a crazy idea. I'm glad I got the chance to read it, little though it is, and I hope everything's going well for you!

This is great so far! I hope someday youre inspired again to continue

I don't know why, but the scene at the end with Gaara is so adorable! From the concern for his sister, to the trust in Naruto, to the willingness to slaughter his enemies without mercy, you nailed him in that awkwardly murderous way.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Aimé beaucoup.

pas la petite fille et petite nièce du shodaime et nidaime pour rien . C'est drôle.

the kyuubi says that he would like you to update this story because he hasn't laughed so hard since he was split from the juubi.

You know, I read somewhere that the main reason he suddenly went from being able to avoid ANBU prankster to being so loud and flashy is the same reason he is so... stable. He can compartmentalize like no one else. So, I'm wondering, if he gets some of his mental issues sorted out...

Well, the girls would like it for sure :P

Ohmygosh, this is AMAZING! I keep imagining Temari’s reaction when she finallly shows up and finds out how wrong Suna was. Like she sends back a letter going “Baki! You were wrong! So fucking wrong! I’m gonna kill the intelligence division, what the hell even?! He’s not an s-class ninja, he really is an idiot! They’re ALL idiots, what the fucking hell?! There is no deep plot or agenda here! Baki! You married me to an idiot!”

And I love how even when he’s tiring things perverse, Jiraiya is improving Konoha via the raised standards.

Please please please tell me you are still writing this, I love it!

OHHHHHH! I came.

No, kidding, I just laughed until I fell over after this chapter!
The idea of so many people assuming the sensical approach by Konoha, when the reality is so retarded, is hilarious!

Also, I like the idea of lots of little Uzumaki-Kits running around, raising hell, while protecting all their assorted "precious people"...

*EVIL CACKLES OF DOOOOOM*

YES, now THIS is what I call a Genius Plan, Tsunade-dono...

Plus, Naruto needs to get his head out of his ass, and make Hinata an honest woman, by being a proper husband to her. She's sweet, and he's loyal, and they're both honest, kind, and compassionate.

Anywho, Screw The Council.