This was an amazing slash fanfic! Can you please keep it going? Maybe you could write them so that they link up and are one story instead of little sections? Anyway, I love the story but maybe there could be a few more sex scenes.

Well, I would review this.
But... there's not much to review. Soft-core porn, hooray.

Wouldn't it be funny if it didn't actually work? Has that ever happened? Where a person just starts licking a wound with no explanation and then a couple minutes later they're all "what the hell is wrong with you why aren't you healing?"
That would almost be more sexy, if one were to ignore the metallic taste of blood lining their mouth. Like eating a handful of pennies!

I would rather see this couple together than zak with crysta w

Yay! Time for an update I say

It is back! (fangal doki doki moment) Pip was my fav character and I wanted him to be happy in the movie so bad so I hated Zach initially for taking Crysta. (Hey a young gal can hold grudges) Now I have matured and fallen into the world of awesome slash. Love this story, so update again pretty pretty please?

I like uridea. Fergully doesn't have enough slash. So i hope you continue yours and i will try to add my own.

I'm not one for slash but this pair is okay by me! Nicely written. Why don't we have more of these?

Nice. Ferngully needs more fanfiction. I loved the note at the end, hilarious! Hope you write more.

hurry up and post

XD This is freaking epic. XD

SCORE! Please write more!

I enjoy your story! HAHAHA "I like dudes- Z and P." I almost died laughing.

Just so you know, I'm writing my own Pips/Zak fic, and I'll do my best to spread your pairing name around. :D

ZAP.

I like! XD

I agree though. There aren't enough slash fics for this fandom out there. D: WE MUST CREATE MORE!

Oh why has this become a dead story? No I refuse to accept this, keep writing please?

OMG. ZAP. Yes. This needs to happen. I seriously adore this fic. SO much 3 Can't wait till you update! *goes off to watch Ferngully*