I just wanted to say thanks for making his birthday October 11th because that's t birthday and nothing ever happens on it. So, thanks!

Well done. The two 'on the beach' scenes framing the story were the best in my opinion.

Great story :)! I love the alt!Doctor, and not enough people wonder about what could have happened to him... So, I'm glad to have found this, and I hope you have written/will write other fics about him.

Thank you so much!

Very interesting story! It's good to see that poor Ten-II can still live a fantastic life without the TARDIS or Rose. I'd love to see where you're taking this.

I also liked the concept of the Doctor's body maturing; I don't think I've see that done anywhere before.

A wonderful story! You did an excellent job showing that Jack is NOT the Doctor, he is his own person. Rose strikes me as a selfish person only concerned with her own needs/wants and simply abandoned both Jack and her mother. Your character development for both of them was very believable.

Brilliant work. I can't find it in myself to feel sorry for Rose or the Doctor. They both acted very selfishly, and not only treated Jack and Jackie badly, but everyone else too.

I feel very hopeful for Jack and his future. I enjoyed the way you developed his character in the story, it was very believable.

Excellent! I haven't seen anyone do a story where Rose leaves 10.5 alone and goes off with the Doctor. Very interesting take on events.

Ah...a nice touching ending to this story. I'm glad that you gave Donna a chance to keep her memories, even though she did die - but a least she was happy.

And I'm sorry if I don't feel any remorse for Rose. She made the choice to leave - albeit rashly - and leave her mother behind. Now she has to live with that guilt - which is good. Everyone needs some sort of guilt to remember.

And I like the fact that Jack has become more confident in himself to move on and even admit it to the Doctor. I like how he makes the two upset by saying that they hurt him - which they did.

Anyway, hope you bring out another one soon!

heh. So he's a libra too. hilarious.

NOw he's ONE of us..bWAHAHAHAHh

I thought that this was good. I like how you show Jack's vulnerability (did I spell that right?) - you just make it very believable and real. And I like how you finally had him ask Katie out on a date. She is so good for him. And I love Jackie's concern - with Rose gone, she needed someone else to look after besides Tony.

Waiting patiently!

Oh ,this is so great! Have you read Tardis-Mole's stuff? you need to. this is on par with taht, and MOle-y is one of my closest friends on here.

By the way, are you a libra? Coz this is so good, you gotta be. I'm a libra, and you smell like Libra! hee

This is really good. I never bought the 'happy ending' for 10.5 and Rose and I believe she'd dump him without a qualm so I find it believable.

I like Katie, too.

Ah, cripes...you are a master!

Ah! I know, I'm turning all mushy now, but it was a really lovely chapter. Jack going into business - this should be interesting. And a way to remember Donna, I think. And I think that Katie is an interesting person. I like how she helps him out with things. I think that she would do him a world of good.

Until next time!

Brilliant take on the Doctor living a human life without Rose. Can't wait to read the next part.