This is a good mind twisting story. Can't wait for the next set

ATTENTION ALL READERS!

I'm DesertedMirage's best friend. I wanted to let you know that very sadly, she passed away five years ago. She was unable to finish this story, I'm so sorry. ;(

I recently published two songfics that she wrote but hadn't ever published, here on fan fiction. Her original novels were also published posthumously, and you can find them if you look up Stephanie Renee Bell Books And Music.
I really hope that you get more of a fix from her writing, and that all is well with you. I cannot express enough nor overstate my gratitude for your review(s) and encouragement. I know that they meant a lot to her.
Sincerely,
Elizabeth (OhGodOfWriting)

OMG, this is a great story! Please update as soon as possible! Donny seems to be worser than he was in High School if he's putting his hands on Max! And I absolutely hate how Max/Terry let so many months go by when they both knew they had feelings for each other; it's their own faults as to what's happening with Max! When Terry do find out, Donny better watch out! Please tell me you're gonna finish this story?

This story was great even though you never came back to finish!

will you return to this awesome story ever? I certainly hope so.

Please update this is a great story and I would love to see how it ends!

oh come on upd8. This is a good story. My prediction is that Max is in an abusive relatioship with her boyfriend (Donny-argh can't stand him caus he's in the way of my favorite coupl) anyway upd8 cause a book is like a movie. You don't go to the movie and watch forty-five minutes of it then it stops. I need you to finsih the movie.

i can't wait til you post the rest i am new to this site and man am i hooked thank you another one of my favs peace and blessings friend libradiva83

This is a very intriguing story. I love the suspense, and the plot seems good too. I figured Donny was some kind of creep. I wonder what is the whole story behind his controlling behavior. And I wonder what secret the other company has. I can't wait to read what happens next.

O_O “About time you got up. I’ve been sitting here starving half to death for hours.”

I guess I should be happy that he let her sleep that long?

I miss the old Max just as much as Terry does.

... and the plot thickens ...

Whatcha hiding Max?

I like the first person with Terry. It's different and done very well. I'm really enjoying this.

And great laying down the ground work of suspicion (because i am suspicious).

Uh-oh Max. *bites lip*

This is quiet. I like how everything is just below the surface and very mellow. I like to watch characters grow into their relationships. Keep it up.

This is a good story. I can't wait to read more real soon. Keep up the good writing!

I'm really enjoying this story so far! Sorry I didn't review more (I normally review every chapter :) but I'm super tired and just wanted to finish what you'd led up to.

Poor Max, she really needs to get out of that relationship and I know just the Bat to do it!