Reviews for Returning Home
Crystalkarlson chapter 20 . 4/23/2019
I really like this story. Please write more soon.
inuyasha16451 chapter 20 . 2/26/2019
Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon
shera98 chapter 20 . 5/30/2018
This was really great. I'm sad to see it stopped before it was complete though, leading up to what I can only imagine would have been agood among of conflict with Lucius. After 9 years without an update I really doubt you'll even see this review.
I really liked the addition of flashbacks showing parts of how they got together and other part events.
Jackie Mehrens chapter 20 . 3/6/2018
I loved this chapter and would love to read more please.
little chibi cherub chapter 18 . 7/21/2015
Eh what? :/ what type of dirty talk is that? "I'm your whore"?
This is not a flame...but I am curious...
little chibi cherub chapter 20 . 12/8/2014
Awwwwwwww...this is gooood :D shame it's not being updated :(
Kaya70 chapter 10 . 5/21/2014
Love it plz update soon
MichGirl07 chapter 20 . 2/14/2014
Oh man... you just left it there with the new threat lurking. That's just mean. But seriously, this is one of the best Harry/Severus stories I have ever read. I know it's been awhile but if the Muse would deem to return to you, I would happily read every word you have to write. I know I'm late to the party here and life and inspiration often disagree but I sincerely hope you return to finish this incredible story.
kjnlojnoio chapter 20 . 8/21/2013
great story, please continue. will harry be pregnant?
Mashkai30 chapter 20 . 1/25/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 20 . 1/20/2013
U gotta write more! This is one of the best snarry's I've ever read! (And I've read a lot)
anonymous chapter 20 . 10/21/2012
You're a good writer, but you lack a plot! This story has no conflict whatsoever, other than the minor problems of what will happen when Severus finds out about the baby (which he does very early on in the chapter with no problems whatsoever) and what the Weasley's will think when they find out about Sev (which they also find out early on and are fine with). Anyhow, for your next stories you should work on creating plot: introduce a conflict, cause it to escalate, solve the conflict, and then end with a nice happy resolution (or a tragic resolution if you prefer).
Azrael Jinsei chapter 20 . 9/26/2012
Thank you so much for writing this. Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
janet1982 chapter 20 . 4/6/2012
awesome story, please update)
jadedheart25 chapter 20 . 2/4/2012
Wow I just finshed the last chapter of this amazing story and I know it been awhile since you last updated this story but I really hope you plan on finishing this story because it truly on of the best ss/HP fanfics I've ever red!
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