I don't understand, in the first call from Raven to Robin she TOLD him how to kill vampires. Fire, she even mentioned that ripping them apart would only delay them as they could bring themselves back together.

Did not like that Raven caved and got back with him immediately. Like girl a day hasn't even passed. From a story telling perspective it's also odd, as the audience just had the crash of the breakup. Then we were waiting for tension to build, and instead got catharsis immediately, which isn't a relief of anything without that tension.

Not gonna lie, not a huge fan of Jasper really. Human Jasper? Swoon worthy. Troubled Jasper? Interesting, and full of possibility. But normal Jasper seems pretty boring and I'm not sure I'm very interested in him.

I really like old timey Jasper, such a gentleman!

Oh what a fun twist! I thought I was just in for a dream!

Lol! Their panic at realizing Edward is a mind reader is both tragic and hilarious; of course they would ruin Raven's hard work in a matter of hours!

I really, really like Robin's concern for Raven. She so often feels isolated, and I love how she does have a family that cares.

I heard another review complain about this, but it was a perfectly reasonable kidnapping. Could she have teleported? Yes. But things were happening very fast and she was on instinct. Very nice!

Ok but I laughed so hard at how afraid Bella was of Raven. I like both characters, but know Bella can be a bit much, and don't think it's out of character d:

Ok, this crossover sounded crazy, but I am really enjoying it so far! I love the world of Forks, and I love Raven and how you write her, and Jasper is absolutely to die for. So this is a surprisingly good combo for me!

This domesticated Raven is shameful...

Raven is pathetic

Rachel Roth. Raven is her hero name.

You should edit this story and maybe incorporate some things from the TV Show Titans.

I devoured this in two days. Gotta say, I loved parts of it but at the same time there was stuff I didn't like. Probably the same stuff you didn't like writing to be honest. And that was the long winded Bella conflict. I understand why her stuff had to take center stage to bring then together but it was frankly more than a little annoying how long her damsel self went on.