Reviews for Scribe Time
sinfulxdaises chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
AWWWW Tsundere Nanao-chan. Adorable. I really like how you included so many prompts into just one fic and you completed it perfectly. I really love the ending. Nanao-chan can hardly be honest about Shunsui. HAHAHA. I bet there will be a time where she doesn't even know to do anything and Shunsui will understand her like the back of his hand. KEEP WRITING STAY INSPIRED thanks for the loving read
UntiedHeartbeat chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
damn...
a.brief.dalliance chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
WOO, we need more fluff of this pairing!
Zara Allegra Vespertine chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Excellent work my dear! I really enjoyed reading it.
aismaiden17 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
MOAR! ...pls?
KeepSmilingItMakesPeopleWonder chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Wow...*rapidly flaps fan at herself*
snow chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I love this so much. You always write them so wonderfully. :D
Weirdo-Lover chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
aww this was so cute and sexy all at the same time.

Only you, wonderful!
Corinaofsewage chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
This was wonderful, truly wonderful. Thank you for the breathtaking read!

Keep on writing!
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I really liked this. All of the prompts were used perfectly.
Maelynne Naveen chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Yummie _ That was really way too much fun - I loved Nanao's denial (as always) and the banter with Rangiku was hilarious 3 Wonderfully done!
lieutenant-taijiya chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I really liked it. I admire you for doing a one hour challange. I don't think I could have done it. I usually have to take a couple days and think about things. Wonderful job.

~Ticia
JapanLiHudson chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Great job with this one. I hope you get re-inspired to work on some of your continuing stories! And I'd like to see where this version of their relationship goes, too!;)
Celira chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Quickly written? Still fantastic. Oh, Shunsui, you rake, you.

Here, have a quick beta, although I guess you might want to leave it in 1-hour-masterpiece form? Sorry if I nitpick, but it saves you the bother & usually I only do these review-betas for skilled writers who seldom skimp on quality. Besides, it's already pretty clean for such a fast write. Edits in parentheses-

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"Papers fluttered off the top of a nearby bookshelf carried by the breeze from the open window(;) it was another good idea gone astray." (clarification on -what- the good idea was, maybe?)

"Of course, throwing her box of peanut cookies on him (comma nixed) where they, inevitably..."

"Few people rarely paid attention" - either "few people ever paid attention" or "people rarely paid attention", your choice.

"The busty blonde made a noncommittal sound in her throat and Nanao came closer(,) noting (that)..."

'“You’re so lucky, Nanao(;) he’s so attentive.”'

"The front gates latched closed behind her(,) pushing her..."

"No one appreciated a good work ethic anymore(,) she thought with a grumble."

"(The) sight of her front door..."

"(")Out of hand(") wasn’t the expression..."

"Who do (you) think I am-" she started indignantly..."

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Nitpicking aside, that was a delight. Always a pleasure to read your writing. *heart*
unevilgirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
*giggle* that was fun! I could very well see Shunsui doing that
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