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sinfulxdaises chapter 1 . 7/9/2016 AWWWW Tsundere Nanao-chan. Adorable. I really like how you included so many prompts into just one fic and you completed it perfectly. I really love the ending. Nanao-chan can hardly be honest about Shunsui. HAHAHA. I bet there will be a time where she doesn't even know to do anything and Shunsui will understand her like the back of his hand. KEEP WRITING STAY INSPIRED thanks for the loving read |
UntiedHeartbeat chapter 1 . 4/25/2015 damn... |
a.brief.dalliance chapter 1 . 8/25/2014 WOO, we need more fluff of this pairing! |
Zara Allegra Vespertine chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 Excellent work my dear! I really enjoyed reading it. |
aismaiden17 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 MOAR! ...pls? |
KeepSmilingItMakesPeopleWonder chapter 1 . 9/17/2009 Wow...*rapidly flaps fan at herself* |
snow chapter 1 . 7/14/2009 I love this so much. You always write them so wonderfully. :D |
Weirdo-Lover chapter 1 . 7/8/2009 aww this was so cute and sexy all at the same time. Only you, wonderful! |
Corinaofsewage chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 This was wonderful, truly wonderful. Thank you for the breathtaking read! Keep on writing! |
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 I really liked this. All of the prompts were used perfectly. |
Maelynne Naveen chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 Yummie _ That was really way too much fun - I loved Nanao's denial (as always) and the banter with Rangiku was hilarious 3 Wonderfully done! |
lieutenant-taijiya chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 I really liked it. I admire you for doing a one hour challange. I don't think I could have done it. I usually have to take a couple days and think about things. Wonderful job. ~Ticia |
JapanLiHudson chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 Great job with this one. I hope you get re-inspired to work on some of your continuing stories! And I'd like to see where this version of their relationship goes, too!;) |
Celira chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 Quickly written? Still fantastic. Oh, Shunsui, you rake, you. Here, have a quick beta, although I guess you might want to leave it in 1-hour-masterpiece form? Sorry if I nitpick, but it saves you the bother & usually I only do these review-betas for skilled writers who seldom skimp on quality. Besides, it's already pretty clean for such a fast write. Edits in parentheses- - "Papers fluttered off the top of a nearby bookshelf carried by the breeze from the open window(;) it was another good idea gone astray." (clarification on -what- the good idea was, maybe?) "Of course, throwing her box of peanut cookies on him (comma nixed) where they, inevitably..." "Few people rarely paid attention" - either "few people ever paid attention" or "people rarely paid attention", your choice. "The busty blonde made a noncommittal sound in her throat and Nanao came closer(,) noting (that)..." '“You’re so lucky, Nanao(;) he’s so attentive.”' "The front gates latched closed behind her(,) pushing her..." "No one appreciated a good work ethic anymore(,) she thought with a grumble." "(The) sight of her front door..." "(")Out of hand(") wasn’t the expression..." "Who do (you) think I am-" she started indignantly..." - Nitpicking aside, that was a delight. Always a pleasure to read your writing. *heart* |
unevilgirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2009 *giggle* that was fun! I could very well see Shunsui doing that |