GO JACE! Get yo woman back whoohoo

Very good story but I am disapointed with the ending. That was just a lazy ending and i think you should redo it. Very good till you ruined it by having things 'go back to normal.'

is this the end of the story?

WHAT?

Oh. Jace is pissed! Carly has to be loving it! You should make it a love traingle!

It's a little hard to follow but I like the story line. Can't wait to see what happens ;)

Not too bad though there was some errors (mostly letters left off the end of a word or a small word missing) I was impressed. I did find it hard to pinpoint the point in time that it was occurring in the series' time line but the end helps to clarify that.

Wow, that was unexpected also. I also just realized something, Jace doesn't know his last name is Herondale yet, shouldn't he have questioned that? Anyway, still a great story!

That thing about Jace was unexpected. But it's a good idea for a story.

Hm, how will she get there?

gosh! dont u just LOVE jace?

i really like this! it has a good storyline and i love dean's character. my biggest critique though would probably have to be punctuation...or i guess the lack thereof. the reason i say that is if you don't put periods where they need to go, the reader will get highly confused.

nice! lol

omg! ahh! what is she up to! ahh! PLEASE UPATE ASAP! .

haha it was good