Kyon, what have you done...

The pace was a little too quick. But! It was very sweet.

LoL, I wish this was longer and had more chapters cause you wrote this well. I liked the ending with him waking next to Haruhi.

Hee. And darn, because I'm in the midst of writing one like this as well (though thankfully it differs quite a bit), but mostly hee.

Ah, this was just great. Short, but to the point. Nice job!

Poor Kyon, Haruhi might just then want to relive that day over and over

Interesting take on the Endless Eight. I wish I could say more, but with a chapter so short, I can't.

I didn't find any grammer or spelling mistakes, either, so kudos for that.

That's it for now. Looking forward to updates.