its awesome

one of the best fanfic pieces ever

OMG. did you watch or read the anime/manga Shugo Chara? Cause that exact same thing happened in one of the episodes XD (the thing with the move the head and drop on concrete. lmfaoooo) yeah I laughedat that :D

The prophecy doesn't sound so good...

I wondered when aika will find out that ethan is dead.

The first 2 lines of the prophecy are easy to understand, but the last 4 are hard, as usual.

This is interesting.

I'm glad that both nico and ethan are here.

I love both of them.

Did aika not know that ethan was dead?

Great, they've got the muse of tragedy playing them now. I just want to warn you, I think it might be borderline sue. I think you can save it, but it is kind of heading in that direction.

*Sigh* well, it was good while it lasted...

I love it when Nico's in denial! Wahahahahahahah! awesome story XD

Okay, it would've ticked me off if you had just been like, "No more story. Sorry." And didn't tell us what happened. But you didn't do that, so thanks.

who's ian?

apparently, lots of things in this is complicated. like it did to nico, it'd drive me nuts too.

me sad. my name is helen too...

you better update soon...

EVIL CLIFFIES~!

This chapter was honestly confusing. It didn't really make much sense. Is Percy in his dream or soemthing? I can't tell.

R U SERIOUS? PLEASE DONT KID LIKE THAT IM HAVING A HEARTATTACK HERE!1

It's Annabeth.

The person who Percy's sword has made contact with is Annabeth. I am absolutely postive.

It is Annabeth.

The story is really good but you are driving me crazy with the cliffhangers! :)

I am going to make a new story.

It may not be put on here 4 a while since I am a writers block. (I will give you a few hints later but I am only on the first chapter rite now.)

I will still b here though just doing nothing but trying 2 break through my writers block.

Keep writing!

-childofzeus (but not in my next story the main character has her godly parent as her mother!)