i kno this has been here since forever but I just read this and its like ive been hit with a bag of bricks with feelings, thank you for writing this story. i love how you portrayed ritsu

Deep and simply wonderful, somehow, it hit the bottom of my heart and that's what's I like about it. I hope you write more!

...Wow. I just totally loved how you contrasted everything Ritsu feels with Mugi's own and then made it all go into a blender. Which then promptly spat out the tangled web of feelings that love can be. And most amazingly, you actually made it make a kind of sense. Truly though: great job. Great writing!

Heh I like the way you paired Ritsu up with everyone in this fic. Oh wait, WHERE'S AZUSA? Sigh, poor Azusa being left out from Ritsu's love. But seriously... Considering writing on Tainakano. They're damn cute after all XD

Now, this is what I call amazing! I really love this! So... deep, so excellent! Favorites straight away! :)

I congratulate you on your unbelievably awesome work!

~ LenxRinKagamine ~

amazing fanfic about Ritsu. hahaha Ritsu had stolen Mio first kiss? poor Mio. but... Now on, Mugi is very interested by Ritsu... and we know "how" is she insterested.

I love your fanfic. Goes to favorites~

I just recently started watching K-On! and I love it so much n_n.

I like all pairings but the one I like the most is Mugi and Ritsu, I don't know why...I just do :3

Truly wonderful fic you wrote here, short but great, good job :D

Ahahaha. Wow.

Okay, so. I couldn't wait til I finished watching this series to dive into the Pit searching for fics. I've read quite a few of them, by now, and yet this one amused me to no end.

Poignant little piece this is... and while a couple spots seemed a little rough, I liked how philosophical this is.

Oh, and the "have them all in one big, committed relationship by lunch"? SO TRUE. 3

Thanks much.

Bittersweet end and powerful. Great fic 3

"have them all in one big, committed relationship" oh, that would be a sight for sore eyes! Too bad Mugi-chan is such a coward in this story!

Love does have its painful moments... but it also has its wonderful ones.

Most excellent.

I'm very fond of the introspective feel. The tense, repetition, and parallelism is well-executed. You add a believable depth to Ritsu's character-the pensiveness does not detract or seem out of character.

"Ritsu understands that if Yui is her first crush, then Mio must be her first true love. That she met them and realized this out of order is both fitting and not at all troubling."

And I am something seriously enamored with these two lines.

~Southpaw

"Wrote this over a couple of hours, late at night, hopefully it doesn't show."

It doesn't show at all. This was simply wonderful and for such a short one-shot, it was thoughtful and surprisingly deep.

Your work in this universe is refreshing. Thank you and please write more.

Whoa, nice. Really, really nice. I'm still in awe and just can't find any more words to add without sounding like an incoherent idiot, so I'll end it there. Fav-ed. Definitely.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. One of these short stories that are so ... how to say... impressive because they say all that's necessary and nothing else. Glad to be able to read it.

See you later with another fic.

While I don't really approve of multiple pairings, I think your fanfiction is pretty insightful. Each girl really does hold a special place in everyone's heart.

One thing that confuses me is the POV. It's not really Ritsu's - rather, it's more like an all-knowing narrator who just happens to hang around Ritsu.

There are slight grammatical mistakes (Your second line, the Yui line, is phrased awkwardly, and you tend to write long-winded sentences. While I understand the need to relay information to the readers (I would know - I'm fairly long-winded as well), short and clear sentences are the best way to go. Not only does it make your story easier to read, but it also lessens the chance of accidentally writing a run-on sentence. Believe me, it happens.

"Wrote this over a couple of hours, late at night, hopefully it doesn't show." Ha, I write my stories in the same fasion. It doesn't show too much, other than the aforementioned grammar errors.

Keep writing!