Oof, the ending. I got feels reading this story and then the end just kinda... fell flat. It felt like there was still so much that needed to be said but instead it was just kinda... meh. *shrugs* nonetheless I loved everything else leading up to it!

Biggest waste of time after that ending lmao. Should have ended when they were dancing right then and there. Dunno what made you think you could drag this out. Hope you learned a lesson.

Just like that?...I hate author like this.. Lame ending

This story was dragged out to far. I had suspected Ino had used some sort of jutsu to help Naruto. In the end he was just being an idiot. This story just left me empty and unfulfilled.

Nothing pisses me off more than writers who don't finish the work. Just poor an ending to it, even if it's crappy at least then i can just say it was a crappy story.

They, this is a good read please keep this going

This whole story has felt incredibly awkward.

:') It's amazing! I just hope they get together! I can't stand it if I end up with a sad ending! (':

Who knew I'd have read through this so quickly! It definitely distracted me a bit at work :P

Your writing has visibly improved if I think back far enough to "A Favor" before it was revised. One of the parts where it really shined especially was during Neji and Hinata's inauguration. Aside from keeping them very well in character, the feeling behind both their speeches was very touching T_T

Knowing how vicious writer's block can get, although I would hope to see the next chapter update soon, it's understandable if it ends up being a longer wait. I'm sure it'll be worth it in the end, even if you decide to have it be the last chapter. You'll at least be able to see your long-term work finally completed! Good job with the revisions, too :)

You know, I never did get around to fully reading "A Favor" back in the day. It's exciting to read the revised version now, especially because everything's as fresh as it could be (including your writing ~).

I sense definite tension in the future chapters... and I'm loving the anticipation it's giving me because I want to know more!

Needs more of them chapters.

Glad Naruto has admitted he still loves Sakura. I hope her going away gives her a chance to clear her mind

Finally, an update! Interesting chapter, too! Also liked the edits.
Can't wait for the next updatte! Please let that be soon!

And that is why they say whatever you do in the dark will be brought to light. Secrets never remain secrets forever.

g8 story