OMG! awesome book! Pure talent!

OMG! Love love love love! Pure talent! Love love! Awesome books!

cool chapter but there are a few spelling mistakes

Please update your story soon!

Omg please update this it’s one of the best I ever read and I just love it so much

Awesome Story please update

i really like your story

Very different, but I'm intrigued and would like to read more. Please consider updating.

oclramacy? the word is OCCLUMENCY! Hmmm, instead of telling people to stop flaming and get a life... go and get yourself a copy of the 5th book and a dictionary!

I don't mean to be rude but FIX YOUR SPELLING or GET A BETA.

The plotline is really good but your spelling and grammar not so much
I love the dark! Harry stories
To all the people flaming this story or hating this author remember this is fangiction its supposed to be different than the actual books other wise its just the books reposted on the site
Its a great story and I really hope you update soon

Ever notice how much the actress's that play Hermione and Bellatrix look alike. Makes me think that would be better than her being a Malfoy

Ok I've been ignoring the spelling error's but really "Olcramcy"? that straight up not even trying to spell it right lol
It's "Occlumency"

Lol, well it's cannon afterall that Ron has absurd levels of Ambition. Just gets held back by his laziness, Now if Ron had Hermiones drive to excel he wouldnt be the bashing fodder that he is in ficdom.

The whole twins idea is unbelievable. Nobody would've ever guessed!