Lovely, I love your writing style, it's almost poetic. Kinda post-modern. But this is a wonderful little portrait of their feelings, I think you captured it brilliantly.

this is amazing, seriously brilliant.

very nice! the lack of capitalization bothers me, but i respect your artistic choice and i think it's kinda cool :)

This is one of the first good Dumbledore/Grindelwald fics I've read! I don't have too much to say about this actually but your language was almost poetic and I enjoyed reading it. My favorite sentence was "maybe it’s not so muddled-up though, because despite the affair and the plans of world domination you still have days of cool summer breezes over melted forms, and it feels normal again, like the days before mum or dad or aberforth broke like antique vases."

Wow. This was interesting. I'm skulking around trying to read others' thoughts and takes on the relationship between Grindelwald and Dumbledore.

This is the first one I'm commenting on, though, because it really made me stop and think "I've got to leave a review this time".

It's incredible that with just a few lines you were able to say so much, to catch so many different shades to this relationship.

Very good job!

i love these types of little sketches, the artful borderline acceptable ones which might be no good, but are really actually tiny works of genius. so, kudos~ and i like the way you write 3

First: Oh god, Latin... No I hate Latin

Second: your fic is really interesstingYou describe in a meticulous way the movements and at the same time the feelings. Moreover the pronoun "YOU3 give to the reader the printing to participate himself, to be actor.

(Im just so sorry for the mistakes, Im french and dont speak english fluently.. Sorry)

And just ask you: Can I translate your fic into french? ]

xx

..that was actually so beautiful. done in the style that i crave but never see enough of.

thank you