Omg love this story its really sad and moving

Pegasus! (lol)

nice story.

Awww!

OK dude, I hate you and love you right now. Hate you for not writing fast enough, making Pan, my 2nd favorite character go through all of that, and love you because you r such a great writer. I'm going to read all of your stories! So write fast or...

omg i'm actually crying cuz its is so funny i likes pans attitude she a mystery trunks wants to find out about and she playing hard to get that want im talking about i love stories like this pan has that attitude that says she dont play

this is such a good story but pan was acting to much of a bitch and trunks was acting so ooc a lot and he was really depressed like almost emo like. well anyway you should make a sequel to it, i want to kno wat will happpen next and who her real father is!

HOLY SHIZZ! that was an absolutely AHMAZING STORY! woaahh! i just read the whole ting straight. ooh im so happyy i read it as it was completed. woah! that was so sad and touching! the grammar wasn't too bad, and the formatting was guud, and the storyline was amazing! it was sooooo sad though! there were many parts where i could literally feel my gut wrenching and my heart clench. it was extremely touch! AMAZING JOB AGAIN! i can't help but say WOAH! pan/trunks is my absolute favorite couple to read about. im really happy i found your story! it was great, and so sad!

this was really good

i like the ending of the chapter

this is really cool so far...but does it have a happy ending

This was soo sad, but it was realy good.

AWW,THIS WAS AMAZING!

thank god that #$%&*#& &$#*- basterd DIED!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?