Reviews for Raw Forgiveness
LightShadow chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
This is so awesome story, your writing is beautiful. I love your story, thank you for writing this. :)
The Monday Child chapter 26 . 3/1/2015
It makes me so incredibly sad that such a talented author hasn't updated this amazing story in over a year. You've broken my heart, kittykritik, and now I need ice cream to fix my sudden attack of sad face.
InuYasha's Kagome chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Poor Gome-Chan...i know how it feels girl! let me start by saying, i've read this story MANY times(3 is alot!) and i always come back cuz this story is SO DAMN GOOD to read! the angst, the tragedy, and most of all(!), the heartbreak that makes my stomach turn o' so nicely! To put it in human words, I LOVE THIS STORY!
InuYasha's Kagome chapter 13 . 9/24/2014
"That bastard," she mumbled. "Didn't even have the decency to-"
She saw a blur on her left in the direction of the house and she turned to see Inuyasha standing in the middle of the yard.
She gasped as she looked up the see the monitor to the computer above his head.
He stood there, staring at her for a moment, his eyes slightly red from crying, and mouth set in a firm line, his body visibly trembling. Kagome could have gasped at the intense emotion she saw in his eyes. It was hard not to drown in the love and desperation that she saw there.
'Inuyasha… '
Then, without warning, he threw the computer into the street. The force of the impact caused the machine to shatter into several pieces, sending glass and wiring all over the paved road.
Kagome clutched her shirt against her chest, trying to calm her heart.
Inuyasha turned and looked at her again, his eyes still holding that same emotion. "I love you," he mouthed to her.
Kagome sat there, feeling a fresh wave of tears drown her vision. When she could no longer see his face clearly, she blinked and turned around, put the car in reverse, backed out of the driveway, and sped away.

Man! You just love making people cry, huh? This paragraph literally broke my heart cuz i can IMAGINE this like i was watching the anime and i was SO heart-breaking to watch {or imagine}! Although, otherwise, i love this FanFic and am glad to be reading it once again as a new author! I'll attack your other stories later!
InuLeyna chapter 26 . 5/20/2014
I loved it! Can't wait for more:)
KShadeslady chapter 26 . 5/10/2014
Really into this now. Hope you finish it.
KShadeslady chapter 25 . 5/10/2014
I'm really feeling bad for Mei. Kind if like this take on Sessh.
KShadeslady chapter 24 . 5/9/2014
Good chapter. Other than mixing up Hitomi and Toshi during introductions. I had to reread it a couple of times to get it right. These two new characters don't sound good.
KShadeslady chapter 23 . 5/8/2014
This is all just fun. Loving it.
KShadeslady chapter 22 . 5/8/2014
Poor Mei. Hope she gets out of this. Hmmm... Sessh as a teacher. Interesting. But I like surprises.
KShadeslady chapter 20 . 5/8/2014
I really liked that. I don't find the fill in background boring. Interesting twist. I was wondering if her son was Sessh's. It was the smirk.
KShadeslady chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
Nice new turn of events. Can't wait to see what happens. I hope you find Mei a nice little hanyou to dote on her. Sounds like she needs one.
KShadeslady chapter 17 . 5/8/2014
That was really enjoyable. I like how you worked out some of their problems. Life with demons, not easy.
KShadeslady chapter 15 . 5/5/2014
Still good. Hope all is going better for you. It's tough when your parents get divorced. Mine did years ago and it almost ruined my marriage too. It affects a lot in your life. Cheers
KShadeslady chapter 13 . 5/5/2014
Going to be a rough ride.
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