This is a good story except for one big thing... something called criminal negligence. Will Du was criminally negligent in leaving Kim alone in the training room, at any setting, for any length of time. That alone would have negated any pleas, even one from the victim. Will's excuse was flimsy at best and a plea of leniency from the victim would have been noted, but declined, in any court of law.

You're a very good writer and I love your stories but this was an obvious omission. I did love your take on Dr. Director being Will's mother, it being quite plausible and added to the story greatly. I'm reading your stories from the oldest on so you might hear from me again on other stories.

Keep up the good work.

The only quibble I have is the seven years elapsed, kind of short for all this to happen. Otherwise, it's great.

Good story about Will Du's smugness getting the best of him. You did a good job explaining the difference between him and Kim and how it would eventually humble him. Also, interesting idea about Will's connection to Dr. Director.

Will is actually nice? That I never thought I'd ever see. And now he's in command of GJ. All it took was for him to nearly kill someone, and have her to still show mercy.

Nice score Kim got. 1.5 billion. And I guess Will did something good when he framed Kim's score and placed it over the training room. There's always someone better than you. That should keep people from doing something stupid. Maybe.

Heh, well, Kim, your beating was severe, but Ron hitting Will wasn't a gentle slap.

Great epilogue.

Keep the good writing.

Well it looks like Will has grown into his new job. I give him props for being able to change like that. His maturity is refreshing after what he did earlier. That was a nice look into the future of Kim and Ron as well. Kim as a diplomat? I can see that. Nice choice with her career.

Nice Job. I’m looking forward to what you do next.

Nice little wrap-up with those two after the time that has passed from the life-changing moment at Will's court martial.

Things seem to be going well for the both of them on all levels.

CB73

Hey! That was a great job you did with this story, Reader. Nice change of pace from some other Will Dus out there. Seeing him change for the better is definitely nice. I liked the "Seven Years Later" sort of epilogue as well, to show how Kim, Ron, and Will have all progressed over the years.

I really enjoyed this story. I hope to see more of your writing sometime. Also.. Mrs. Dr. Stoppable has a real nice ring to it. Will her nickname be Mrs. Dr. S when Kim and Ron's children get friends and bring them around? Haha.

Keep up the fine writing.!

Reader that was a nice story. You was able to take a minor character and give him a life. When 'Hero's Corner' comes out later in the year you'll have a chance to see Steve Barkin.

Thanks for the story, if ya don't mind I'll put it in my favorites.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

seeing Will grew up I think that had a whole bunch with the way he was acting.

ST-103

Am enjoying it Reader. Good job so far. Du being the arrogant so and so that he is. I wonder if he would like to meet blue boy in a dark alley? Once Ron finds out what he did.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

I thought he had no chance to ever re-enlist in Global Justice. But he's running it is he a civilian agent?

Enjoyable story, I think that you gave Will Du his proper Du. (Yes, I wanted to say that). I also think that Kim was well protrayed. Looking forward to your update.

Will owes Kim a great debt for what she did for him. A debt I don't think he could ever repay. Not surprised that he made the choice that would allow him to rejoin GJ.

And now he learns about Dr. Director's secret but had to learn it from Kim.

Will should go to rehab for his ego problem and that would help everyone a lot.

And Dr. Director better tell him before Kim does. It'll be better for her.