That was cute and I hope that you will write more IPS stories.

That... was... AMAZING! So sweet, and hot! Shit... it's four a.m. Bed. Sleep.

i aways wanted to see mary and marshall together! but her name is spelled mary not mare! just so you know!

This was probably the only story I've ever read of In Plain Sight that was more then a few chapters long.

I absolutely love it! Mary and Marshall are so cute! And it's just like Mary to think that Marshall's father is wanting to kill her.

Great job!

:D :D :D :D :D So that was amazing! This is like the cutest series ever! :3

the end? i was waiting to see how Stan and Eleanor take it! oh well. Love the story!

' .Lamb

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Kyle Beth

are you going to write a sequal to show what happens when stand and them find out

Very good ending, however I would have loved to see Stan's reaction to the pair. Still it is a very good story.

-Kate

Nice chapter. Poor Mary meeting the relatives. I'm sorry I didn't review sooner I was in San Fran and my family has this rule about no computers.

-Kate

D'aw! So cute! Lol great job.

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aww. i loved it! that was a great ending! :D

This fic was a joy to read, and I'm sad to see it end. But, I can't wait to read more IPS fanfic from you. Keep up the great writing. :)

loved this, great ending! great job! can't wait to see more outta you!

YAY! I really liked this sotry, and while I'm sad it's over, I think it had a great ending. Good job!

The story is done?