ugh so disappointing, its like you wanted him evil and are now trying to redeem him. i hope it's just a ruse and he continues on with the destruction of konoha.

Please I am begging you to continue writing this story. I want to know what is next and how it ends. Please I beg of you don’t stop.

Story was really entertaining to read.

Sadly, it looks like it may have been abandoned. Shame, really wanted to see Sakura fall deeper to the dark side with Naruto.

please dont stop. I cant wait to see how this ends and the journey Sakura takes to get stronger. So please I beg of you to continue. I cant wait for the next chapter.

Gamabunta has a sword, not a

Crybaby naruto

well that was disappointing. the story started off with such potential and then lost it by letting him show forgiveness to team 7 and the bullshit fight where he got captured. This was supposed to be a dark /evil naruto. He should have finished and destroyed everything. You chickened out and couldnt complete the mission.

Please I beg of you to finish this story. It is getting really good. I love this story you created. Just please from the bottom of my heart finish the story. Thank you.

please update i beg of you it was getting good.

ARGH! Need more! By the hosts of Hell, the daemons from the pit shall have thy soul unless you finish this fic!

-excuse me-
We want more! We want MORE! WE WANT MORE!

Please Sir, could I have more?

please continue. You are doing such great job. I love this story so much. I am begging you to continue. Please.

If you still look at these I loved this story and would love to see it finished

it's upsetting to me that this never finished, but i understand. some of the people in these reviews are dicks. i liked your story and so did a lot of other people. if you ever wanted to do just a simple and quick ending just for closure, i would be okay with that.

not that i dislike the idea of the story. it is interesting and i like the premise my only complaint is your reason for him leaving the village is complete crap. Naruto knew how Sakura felt about sasuke. knew he was going to bring back the guy she had a crush on and that it wouldn't help her fall for him. to go from cannon for this is very very flimsy. even just another scene a flashback even of you changing the tone of the promise naruto made sakura would have fix it. made it an iron clad reason rather them a paper thin excuse for him the leave the village. still if in my own head i pretend the promise had a different tone and wording before your story started then very intriguing idea.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.