| Reviews for A Gift |
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  allyson chapter 1 . 5/9/2013 please write the next one what happens |
 Madam Jacinta o3o chapter 1 . 4/16/2013 Aw. That's so cute! 3 |
| julieth areane chapter 1 . 11/24/2012 hi its very beautiful :] |
| i am aimi chapter 1 . 8/20/2011 kawaii~! (thumbs up) xD ~ aimi 3 |
| ILoveAnimeVeryMuch123 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010 Cute, but two things. Nina has red-orange hair and burnt-orange eyes. And its Pearl, not Purell. I'm not even sure how you got Purell, since the katakana says Paaru, or "Pearl", Purell would be Pureru... And thats some pretty different looking katakana. |
| BabyLuvGal chapter 1 . 4/19/2010 sHORT And CuTe Kawaii |
| sakura240 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010 ... totally cute! kya! |
| icymint4 chapter 1 . 8/19/2009 Cute! |
| utterlyheartbroken chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 so cute |
| Naruto's Biggest Fan chapter 1 . 7/3/2009 Pretty good! When Nina kissed Zero you could have put more detail... You had: "That's your gift!" Nina said, standing up. She walked away by then. Does she like me? Zero thought. I finally figure out who I like...Nina said, smiling. Zero-kun. You could have done: "That's your gift!" Nina exclaimed, standing up with a smile. She walked away from him. Does she like me? Zero thought with a slight blush. He was happy that she had kissed him. I finally figured out who i like... Nina thought, with a slight blush and a smile. Zero-kun, do you like me back? That leaves them hanging and it makes the ending better. |
