wow Kagome got maaaaaaaaaad.

ih he's evil

wow. Anyway, just a couple of little spelling errors

"Only if you take too much pride."

"So what if too much pride?" (is the if an IS?)

"Of course, however, you will learn that inu (inu needs an "s") are very prideful creature. We demand respect and when not shown we must honour our name or else loose (one less "o" for lose) our dignity."

those were the few little things that needed to be looked at. Anyways, great story- keep writing!

Very good! I liked it. Please continue with this story!

nice, keep it up

sneaky dog

Hahahaha

this is a very nice follow-up chapter, somehow it seemed very Kagome like :)

XD he kissed her!

*laughs* Aw... but it was an oddly Sweet trick that she was caught in. _

Thanks for writing. _ I really enjoyed this chapter. The "sensation of light featheriness" was a nice touch... even if it's not a real word. ;)

Haha! I figured out what the last thing was the moment Kagome came into the picture! I don't know if you ever saw this little comic strip about such an incident between these two but i was definitely picturing that outcome. I like Sesshoumaru's little brag as well, that was good )

haha, oh bad puppy he is

Good choice of words there: "fetch", ah just too perfect )

Haha, this seems fun ~_

nice keep it up