Hey, when are you going to finish this story, its excellent! I read it a long time ago and never forgot it.

HEH!

Wow. That just bloody destroys Peter and Makes Pan.

Despite all the adult themes, gore, blood and such, the Feral Neverland you've created, the alternate universe, with the modified characters has its own legendary qualities in the bloodlust. i like the fact that you've logically explained existence, and counter existence. And despite all the brashness, the evolution of the characters, of John the hoodlum, Micheal: silent and special, Wendy: average, gutsy, loud, daring, prudish, cursing... its almost enthralling, coz you come to overlook the language.

M. It does seem, however a little passive, less captivating in the last few chapters, as opposed to the gripping action of the initial story.

Somehow, Pan [i dare not call him peter, for he isnt. not really] carving his name along the extent of Hook's ship.. That was a fascinating thing. i dont know. it just was. To fit your story's theme, this is probably what his childish pride would have morphed to, to supply his crude character.

Don't abandon Pan.

wow, three years of not updating. *didn't realize she was following this story for that long...*

you've got such great writing skills and this story is so...so... addicting that I hope you update soon, possibly in the next decade. if you would.

and my favorite fairy tale so far is The Robber Bridegroom found here

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I'm really really upset that this story has died, it's amazing, fantastic and marvelous. I'm writing this review to prod you into starting it up again. So please continue this! Please?

do british teens really say bling? i know some ghetto kids in florida that say it...

*clasps hands and grins* And it's stories like yours which make me believe that there's still hope out there for the well-written, meaningful stories that MATTER instead of the shit that's floating in the clogged toilet of fanfiction world. I love this concept of Peter Pan...it's creepy, it's real, it's a new take on the fairy tale and i love the darkness of it. Moral convictions and everything, especially the fact that the grown-ups are scared of teh children. Awesome job.

Lordy Matt, it's been something like what years since we last spoke, I hope things are well with you and that you start on Pan again soon...

Misty

man, i read your story and it was just... WOW! I loved it. took me only 2 days to read all the chapters.. i couldnt wait until you posted the next chapter. then i saw the last time you updated. please, please, PLEASE don't abandon your story! i kno it's been a while, but please don't leave us dedicated fans hanging here! i've seen all your reviews. lotsa people love this rendtition of Peter Pan. don't disappoint us!

O.o THIS STORY IS FREAKIN' AWESOME! Ahem! Well ... that's pretty much what I wanted to say. Oh! And sorry. Can't help you out with the voodoo. I'm the type that'd kick you in the balls in person if you piss me off, but no worries! I don't know where you live nor would I harm you over this great fic. Can't let the author be inhuman pain before he finishes the story, now can I?

Also, I've been waiting for about FOUR years for this other mindblowing fic to update, so your case isn't that bad. And I, myself, haven't updated my crummy Zoids fic in over a year so no biggie.

CAN'T WAIT 'TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER'S OUT! -

Great story, this is actually my second time reading it! Hopefully there will be an update soon! Keep up the incredible work and please, please, please, update as soon as possible!

you..you..you've turned the story of Peter Pan into a violent, and vulgar story. You've turned the characters into completely different people. And I LOVE IT. your story is funny and very entertaining to read. PLEASE update soon. ( I love John in this story) I can't wait for more.

well mr. mcmac, are you going to finish Pan, or you gunna leave all your loyal readers hanging? i mean, i'm still waiting to read the final version of the next 3 chaps (that you gave me back in, what... may?) and then read some more! i think you've left them waiting long enuff, throw 'em a lil bone hunny, i think they deserves it!

loves yah and such!

-DiE .

WOW! damn this is one great story! so many origianl ideas..i havent finidhed it all yhet but i hope to soon!

This is a great story! Very original, I love the new take on it. I just wish you would update!