MORE!

Do you need any more incentive than that?

I'll be honest, there were a few small errors with the grammar or typos, but unless Chephren or yourself are professional editors... It's to be expected. (mostly it is the fault of a word-processing program. Even the high-dollar ones.)

But seriously, WOW. I like Vincent, and this is a very good characterization of him. He does seem to be passionate, and when he becomes even more passionate about something I can imagine him to react like this.

Please, please, please! Write/post the next part! Hell, I'd be happy with MPreg... Well, maybe. :/

Eagerly awaiting,

Anonymussy

Hey

This was an awesome One-shot. But i think it could be made into

an even more amazing story! Yazoo and Vincent are perfect

together. Keep up the good work. Plz keep this couple alive hehe.

Gah! This is so drool-worthy! I've never considered this pairing before but you just made me a fan! Thanks for the wonderful read and I hope you'll post more fics with Yazoo as uke coz I firmly believe that Yazoo is better off as a bottom, LOL! XD

OMG that was the best fanfiction evuh!

XD

So many nose-bleeds!

YazooXVincent is now my fav FF VII pairing!

I love this story, it's truly wonderful! I would be overjoyed if you were to write more and post it!

Loved it...Anything Yazoo is great, add Vincent into the mix - and well, spontaneous combustion really!

This was excellent. Very well done! You should definitly post the rest! :)

extremely well too. i liked very much

Whoa, I think I need to go and have a cold shower, well done my dear.

chance.

Love the story,HUGE Vincent fan to the point i want to be tronned in to FF and watch all of his smutty in take xD. So plase post more up its be such a shame if you didnt. -

I simply love it! *wipes drool away* ;-)

Oh dears...this is something hot, please post more, I have a lot interest at!

I love Yazoo and I love Vincent, since I read Diabolic.

So, these two together...WOW!

Hugs from Brazil

ROTF ! That was plotless smut allright ! :D But hot !

And I know its a collaboration but this :

"Im... Im all yours-UHNG," Yazoo assured..."

bears the BMIK mark for sure ! I love it when he turns all incoherent and bothered.. ;)

I read it quickly last night and I had a laughing fit on my way to bed.. I suddently imagined some internet game :

*Get Yazoo safely back to the camp by using the arrows while avoiding the perverts hiding behind the trees...*

are you going to write more ? More Vinzoo or more Yaz encounters while walking back to camp ? the forest is alive ! :o

Oh and I love the rimjob and tongue-fucking part. I love when Yazoo gets it that way :D He is good enough to eat.

(oops, did I just write that ? yes I did..)

HOT.

That was err very hmm...delicious.

Yazoo and Vincent are perfect together, both damaged and freakishly somehow inhuman.

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This was very good, fantastic portrayal of them both, Vincent is so nervous initiall, its brillint