i'm not particularly attached to yaoi... more especially MuxTsu because i hated muraki (he was such a great villain)... but with your work, i got to understand the evil villain more. (and why is tsuzuki suddenly forgiving towards muraki? is that due to the "superior" of Meifu's spell being discussed in ch.7?)

i think i have an idea as to where this story is headed, but still, it different when it's the author him/herself ties up the loose ends... and i really find it disappointing that you may not ever update this story again-please continue this on (and Amber Ashes, too).

would it be safe to assume, givin the dates to this fic that you are not going to finish it? i have to admit that makes me very sad. i started reading it on the MurxTsu yahoo mailing list and was hoping that it would be finished. you areally had a great fic going, i hope that maybe you have a chapter stashed some where and are willing to post it, if not, that's ok, though disappointing. Anyway, i really enjoyed what you have posted, certainly a twist on what i have seen, thank you

This is really good so far, I hope you'll update soon -

hi, I think this fic is really good and progressing very nicely. I was wondering, however, if you were going to continue on with this fic. I'd like to see what happens, and who this mystery killer is.

Muraki as a Shinigami, wow cool idea. You know Muraki deserves some really special recognition even though he is obviously the villain of the series. I think a story needs to centre around him when it comes to angst and relevance to his past - maybe it's to spread some sympathy XD. LOL. Don't mind me I went a little insane there. The story is interesting and you should continue when you have the chance.

Love it. Continue.

Oooh, very interesting story. I'm very curious as to what will happen next. It's looks like it's going to be a very intriguing plot.

I realy enjoyed this story...I never thought of Muraki as a Shinigami, but you've made it work nicely.

Yeep; I think my eyeballs just fell out. MURAKI A SHINIGAMI? Heh ; there goes the neighborhood! Got my own theories on who did him in (bet I'm right, too); I think your characters are quite a bit more *forgiving* than the ones in canon, but the storyline is still good and VERY interesting. Write more! Muraki as a shinigami... well, it's penance of a sort, I suppose...