It's weird to read a unfinished story that you want to be updated but then realized it was last updated months before you were even born

love it please write more

You spelled Hermione wrong... Every time...

Please update soon! I really like this story.

Continue please I love this

Why is Harry talking like Dumbledore? I don't think he ever said 'shall' in his life.

James and Lily Potter DIED in 1981! They graduated in around 1977!

I gave up reading this FF at this point, even though there are 10 more chapters. Not meaning to be nasty, but you need to improve it and make it more interesting.

You-Know-Her

This is sooo good! I really hope you plan on eventually continuing it.

And now Lily's a muggleborn again? Honestly your fic's interesting but you have got to get your facts straight. And Remus and Hermione? Seriously? That's just sooo wrong on sooo many levels, 1) he used to be her teacher 2) Hermione understands better than anyone that you can't mess with time, yet by dating Remus that's exactly what she's doing

Okay there are a few mistakes in this chapter. . . 1) Lily's mum going to Hogwarts, which would make her a witch, with would make Petunia a witch

2) Lily wouldn't have been a muggle, she is however a muggleborn, but with you making her mum a witch Lily would therefore become a halfblood.

hurry up with chapter 17 please

Merlin, I wish you finished this fic! It's so good!

amazing fic!

I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! When they go back will anything have changed? Did they change anything in the past? And I love that Sirius (adult) is in this story.