Reviews for This Whirlwind
Shamelessly Radiant chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
I like it, but I don't know if I like your Hermione. To me, she wouldn't have continued cheating on Ron. But it is lovely, in every other way.
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
I hardly ever read fics that correspond with the epilogue. But I can make an exception for this. You have both characters down perfectly and gives a whole new spin to the Harry Potter ending.
dame egocentrique chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
In my opinion, this is one of the best infidelity fics. I like how it wasn't loaded with too much angst and how both Draco and Hermione handled the situation smartly. It's a fic that would lead you to wonder what would happen in the fallout, or if there will ever be a fallout, but at the meantime, you're satisfied with it. And hell I am. Kudos! :)
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I'm amazed you made this so believable, it could be canon, you made it so good!

I don't know how you did it, but Hermione was in character, very much like in the books, open minded, clever, big hearted... I don't really believe that someone can love two people, yet you managed somehow to convince mee. :)

And Draco, poor souls, so desperately wanting to be normal, to be accepted, to enjoy the fatherhood!

Nice story, brilliant, even! :)
gnrkrystle chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
heartbreaking...but very good. Thank you for sharing!
NekoAyameChan chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
awsome story i realy badly want more XD
The Crimson Sheath chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I loved this story. I loved how it actually followed the books, but at the same time, was exactly the way it all should have been. It was fantastic. I loved it. Your writing was wonderful to read. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
gyhjohcfgjkkkkk chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Hi!

I really enjoyed this. I liked how Hermione loved Scorpious too in her own way. But even better I like how she loved Hugo more than her two lovers. Good story.
verity candor chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Aw, you keep them in character, and make it work really well. Lovely job writing them, a warm fuzzy sort of affair (haha, geddit?) - and I loved it.
perfidiouspink chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Ah love is crazy, this was good to read, if only infidelity could really be so simple lol
dracoshott28 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
i really enjoy the way you are writing this story, and i dunno there's some hidden passion underneath it all. I love it, please update soon.
pink-strawberries chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
love love love!1
Rita Arabella Black chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
This is a marvelous story, so well written and it captures and keeps the reader's attention right away. I'm so glad you decided to publish it here.

I especially love the next to the last paragraph how Draco and Hermione touch and doesn't acknowledge it. Brilliant.