Reviews for This Whirlwind |
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Shamelessly Radiant chapter 1 . 1/4/2015 I like it, but I don't know if I like your Hermione. To me, she wouldn't have continued cheating on Ron. But it is lovely, in every other way. |
Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 1 . 2/28/2014 I hardly ever read fics that correspond with the epilogue. But I can make an exception for this. You have both characters down perfectly and gives a whole new spin to the Harry Potter ending. |
dame egocentrique chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 In my opinion, this is one of the best infidelity fics. I like how it wasn't loaded with too much angst and how both Draco and Hermione handled the situation smartly. It's a fic that would lead you to wonder what would happen in the fallout, or if there will ever be a fallout, but at the meantime, you're satisfied with it. And hell I am. Kudos! :) |
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 2/12/2012 I'm amazed you made this so believable, it could be canon, you made it so good! I don't know how you did it, but Hermione was in character, very much like in the books, open minded, clever, big hearted... I don't really believe that someone can love two people, yet you managed somehow to convince mee. :) And Draco, poor souls, so desperately wanting to be normal, to be accepted, to enjoy the fatherhood! Nice story, brilliant, even! :) |
gnrkrystle chapter 1 . 9/3/2010 heartbreaking...but very good. Thank you for sharing! |
NekoAyameChan chapter 1 . 7/11/2010 awsome story i realy badly want more XD |
The Crimson Sheath chapter 1 . 10/21/2009 I loved this story. I loved how it actually followed the books, but at the same time, was exactly the way it all should have been. It was fantastic. I loved it. Your writing was wonderful to read. Loved it, loved it, loved it. |
gyhjohcfgjkkkkk chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 Hi! I really enjoyed this. I liked how Hermione loved Scorpious too in her own way. But even better I like how she loved Hugo more than her two lovers. Good story. |
verity candor chapter 1 . 7/13/2009 Aw, you keep them in character, and make it work really well. Lovely job writing them, a warm fuzzy sort of affair (haha, geddit?) - and I loved it. |
perfidiouspink chapter 1 . 7/5/2009 Ah love is crazy, this was good to read, if only infidelity could really be so simple lol |
dracoshott28 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009 i really enjoy the way you are writing this story, and i dunno there's some hidden passion underneath it all. I love it, please update soon. |
pink-strawberries chapter 1 . 7/1/2009 love love love!1 |
Rita Arabella Black chapter 1 . 7/1/2009 This is a marvelous story, so well written and it captures and keeps the reader's attention right away. I'm so glad you decided to publish it here. I especially love the next to the last paragraph how Draco and Hermione touch and doesn't acknowledge it. Brilliant. |