This was so damn emotional, I'm full on crying. Oh my god, so well written and so beautiful

I had to look u the serotonin thing before I understood fully, and it wasn't until they mentioned Cowabunga Carl that it clicked that it was set in the film, but great idea

simply wonderful

*quiet squee*

Love this next part :) Will read more of your work :) x

I love the way you write Raph's emotions as physical objects. It's very striking.

Oh my god :') lovely story. A little different Don that I'm used to but it's just a good thing. Thanks!

Awww, Raph shows his sensitive side! So sweet.

that was so sweet!

And lo behold! This is the 2nd Ninja Turtle fanfic i've read and so far i'm liking these! XD poor Donnie. and Mikey being all sweet and supportive. and Raph. at least he was sweet in the end as well. loved it~! well written, of course too! :D

This had me about to start crying for poor Donny. And then Raph realizing it at the end, and his last line. That really got me. Bravo.

oh!Sob!very good!

Aw man! I hate it when I cry for a bunch of... turtles! *sniff* I thought you did a really good job. I always felt sad for poor Donny in the 07 movie. Aweosme fic.

aww, that was awesome and sad, i loved it. Like how you portrai Mikey too. _. you should post a sequel, I'd love to read more

Wow, that was so sweet! Aww, it was a bit rough there especially when Raph confronted Don about the situation and like how Don through it back in his face. Also, thought it was touching how determined Mikey was to help out his brother and, haha, sera-toenail stuff! XD That was priceless!

Anyway, I love how Raph overheard the conversation between his two brothers and how everything kind of fell into place for him and he understood. That was so sweet! And I could totally see it all! Great job, beautiful story, I loved it!