Beautiful. I loved it. Odin speaks so fancy I really liked his riddle like speech. Well done.

good story

Bittersweet and wonderful~

This is an amazing oneshot. It is by no means shallow, trite, nor childish (which sadly make up the majority of shorter stories). You so clearly and accurately expressed Squall's behavior.

If this story is unchanged from 9 years ago, I would be remiss to not seek out your recent works. If it is revised, I am still well impressed by your work and look forward to your future compositions

Holy crap...I actually felt a tear at the end of this story.

Listening to Machine Head's Descend The Shades of Night and this story...Wow. Powerful together. O.O

Great job! :D

interesting story you have here. update soon :D

This was an amazing story! I actually logged in to give you a proper review!

You captured both characters amazingly well! I kind of wish this was in the game because it fit so well. The writing was beautiful and I hope to read more of your writing shortly.

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This was a very nice piece! I loved the writing style and the idea. Well done :)

Short and sweet but as good as always. The twist on Odin was a neat explanation. Actually, it reminded me of another story where they used Odin as a former but in a different sense. Either way, very nice. Then again, when has it ever been anything but? :)