I hating sasuke so much if I ever saw him before me I will kill him
Motherfuker bastard manhore...

you didn't communicate. everything you think is happening is happening only in your head and not getting translated into text. you were incoherent and didn't carry the reader along especially from chapters 7 to the end.

This is absolutely a work of art, I love the way you laid out everything oh it’s so poetic thank you so much

Your note at the end explain everything.
And, given your goal, I think I can say your story is damn good.

Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful in it's own, dark, twisted way.

Hello~
This is a nice story, very dark I must say but it fits the ninja world.
At the beginning I saw more psicological descriptions than in the end, thus it was harder to understand what has happening.
Sasuke was such a monster, he must had had bigger traumas than the ones I can imagine, though I would like to know.
Well, Itachi —at least to my perception— is basically dead. Is that what you wanted to show? His body almost is, and his mind can not longer live in the present and in the reality.
I liked this last paragraphs.
I must congratulate you, wish you write some other SasuIta.
(Please forgive my English)

Awsm story. I really loved it. Can i plz request you to write a sequel of it. Where there is less pain and more romance ;)

With this, I thank you for your wonderful (and terrifying) story. It's always a pleasure to read more Sasuita, and see how authors define their dynamics, and I thoroughly enjoyed yours.

I liked the Sasuke/Itachi parts, but the the rest was really boring and pretty confusing in my opinion. The scenes dragged on way too long. I could have done without all of that. I wish this fic would have focused more on Itachi and Sasuke.

This is really interesting so far! It makes me really, really sad to think about Itachi sick though. :(

Okay a few questions, did itachi die in the end?
Was that anbu captin really sasuke?
Did naruto save itachi in the end?

this ending took my breath away! :O your writing is always worth the wait :D

god
that was a disturbing read
i loved
whenever you decide to come back ill be waiting

You gonna update anytime soon? Please... there's so many of your stories that I absolutely adore and you're leaving me hanging! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It's awesome.

Been a yeaaaar pls update. I hope sasuke remembers how good itachi was to him soon