I just loved this story.
I felt Neku's anger, embarrassment, confusion, fish.
Oh. I have never had so many feels with another story.
F THIS ;)

Poor, poor, POOR Neku... I almost feel bad for him...

Awesome story! I loved all the Joshua stuff in there (especially the God- complex thing)! :3

"I shit holiness,"
"Jesus-beam,
"And all hell was unleashed."
XD
Great fic.

Ahahahahahaha! This whole chapter, oh my god! I had such a hard time keeping my laughter under control, poor Neku! XD

Great ending to this fic. It was an enjoyable read.

Oh my gawd. I love this fanfic! (I won't be able to list everything I liked in one review, though! Lol) :D I'm seriously obsessed with JoshuaXNeku... And I normally don't like yaoi... But, anyway, I LOVE how you portrayed the characters. Beat's obnoxiousness (is that a word? O.o), Rhyme's sheepishness, Joshua's smugness... I can't tell you how much I loved this story!

-DemyxFangirl

P.S. I loved Mr. Mew, too. And I totally agree that Neku is a Cloud wannabe. XD

I could not help but laugh at every chapter. I haven't read such a good crack fic in a long time. *laugh* And here I thought only Joshua could make wearing feminine clothing look good. XD Good work! I love it!

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was so entertaining with all the interactions that the characters had! Poor Neku and Joshua at the end though... must have been so embarrassing. :D

hahaha, this was a really hilarious story, long but extremely intriguing XDDD loved it, and i hope you'll continue to write wonderful stories~!

Ending was great but this part:

"So he was like, 'Oh my gosh, Joshua, I love you so much. I will be your proxy forever and ever!"

Killed me forever.

The whole story was nicely done, but now I want to see Eri as a GM

Ah Neku, you were so masculine before this story : )

Actually you play Neku fairly well, I'd give you an A except he agreed to some things a boy would never do in his right mind. But ignoring that minor fact let's review.

Beat- Excellent you got his personality down to the letter, you play him better than anyone I've seen thus far, well done. Same goes for Rhyme honestly.

Eri- Secretly I believe this is how you behave in real life. That is to say smiling at the displeasure of others and making dark threats that surprise people : P.

Shiki- Well done, she's a mouse in this story, which is pretty real. She's the type of girl who hangs out with a more dominant figure (Eri) and maybe Neku. The real thing is... I wonder if she'd really go through with all this. I'm scared to read the next chapter. : o

Neku- Well it seems Neku has earned the pretty pink dress award for wearing women's clothing and being made two women's bitch. He's been forcibly tied up by a toilet, mocked by all of his peers and he did little more than make idle threats. Honestly, Neku is completely out of character, but I believe you're doing this for comedy reasons. I doubt you're going for making him like the actual Neku. You know the same guy who wouldn't conform ever. Still, I do see the humor here and there. This story is NOT made for men. I'm probably going to stop reading it here because I have a feeling there's going to be women's fanservice later.

Joshua- And who else to provide the female fanservice, but him? Yes the Composer is back and as gay as ever. I see you're taking the gay smartass approach. Commendable, but still a fangirls dream which quickly waves the red flag of 'get the hell out of here' to all men in the vicinity. Although I still think your story is quite funny, I really don't think I can read further.

Writing style- bold, witty and crisp. Honestly it's one of the reasons to read. It's a wonderful means of storytelling that isn't afraid to break a norm or two. Still I like your style and I like the snark littered throughout the story.

Overall: Good story, I'd love to read it if I were a woman. I'm not... so I'm going to do the masculine thing and completely run like a little bitch from this story. I don't like Neku. I don't like where this is going, and I have a feeling that your talent will get you far in the female community. I tip my hat to you and hope the rest of your story is this good. Sorry for the bias, but don't think that makes your story bad. It's not for me and I hope that's respected.

Keep up the good work. I'll look into some other stories you've written.

-0er0 out

Pfftttttt hahhahahhahahahahhaha that was an awesome ending! I love how Joshua asked neku if he read yaoi manga. You know, as cute as junjou romantica is, seikai ichi hatsukoi is cuter, if not more. Eri would make a scary GM, I can see the missions now, it would involve clothing, fashion and dressing up. I'm so sad to see this go. Great job!

Adorable and funny~! I loved it! (And did not expect to be mentioned in the opening author's note. Thank you for that.)

It was a funny story with emotions and plot. Well done .

Pffffft. Even if this chapter was just plain crack, I loved it. It was cracklicious. I love cracklicious fics. Maybe it's just me...