Not only is this an excellent story, but it's also very relatable for me. Good job!

This is so good. I read it every night. I can relate because I kind of put up an emotional barrier a year ago, so I'm not very close to my family members. I also love Ahsoka. Thank you for this!

I believe this was an absolutely amazing story, just one comment though, Ahsoka’s skin color is a bright orange, not dust brown

That was beautiful. I love the Ahsoka and Anakin bonding part.

Eh, I can understand why Anakin is not doing well as a master. He didn't want a padawan in the first place but the Council assigned him one in the first place. Then he's sent out to battle so he doesn't have other masters to ask for advice and watch over the relationship, like masters in the temple do. So how would he know if something's wrong and how to fix? Not until an experienced master comes along. Completely unfair to blame a novice doing something he doesn't know how to do.

i loved this bonding moment between it i hope you write more like this because it was amazing

I really like this story that you came up with. I hope that you will do more like that. Do you have anymore Stories about Anakin and I? If you don't, I could help you out. Again, I really like this story and I hope that you will do more just like it.
From your fellow reader, Ahsoka Ali Tano, the real Padawan of Anakin Skywalker. P.S. May the Force be with You my friend.

What an awesome story! I loved how well you've penned all three characters, but especially Obj-Wan. His gentle, careful nature shines forth and perfectly portrayed here. Great story! Thanks for sharing your time and talents with us!

I liked this story and I think that you should do more stories like this one because this story showed that Anakin and I share that brother sister,father daughter bond and I would like to read more stories like this one. So please continue writing these stories,and if you need any more ideas,I would be happy to give you some.
From you friend,Ahsoka Tano,the real Padawan of Anakin Skywalker. P.S. May the Force be with you my friend.

I loved this! I really liked how Obi-wan fixed the problem and the scene at the end was very sweet. Overall i truely enjoyed reading this and keep up the good work!:)

That was so sweet! I made me tear up... *sniff* Write more!

-The General

This was a very heart-warming story. It makes me wonder if there is more kinder affectionate side to Anakin's training of Ahsoka that we don't see (one can hope).

This was very good! You did a great job! I like how you added in things that helped to explain the story before we even knew what the story was. This really helped me to see a deeper meaning in this story. Also, the title was very creative! I never would have been able to come up with it.

One thing that just occurred to me is I wonder what happened to Ahsoka once Anakin joined the dark side as Darth Vader? It would be very interesting to read a story like that.

Keep up the good work!

Great story! I love the Obi-Wan and Ahsoka interaction; I believe he was an important part of Ahsoka's training, offering things Anakin did not always remember to teach. I'm glad Anakin listened to his dear Master and made things right with his own little Togruta padawan!

awww. Thats so sweet!