Whyyyyyy?!

This is so good! I really hope you continue it sometime. Your writing and premises are great. Plus the suspense with the shot, scream, and darkness at the end of the most recent chapter - man, I want to know who got shot.
I actually learned of your writing as a recommendation for some great ShikaTema stuff. (They were right!) Thanks for writing and sharing.

This story is one of the best I’ve read so far. It has everything. I hope you pick it up again. I look forward to reading it completed

What the... what the... WHAT THE HECK?! Don't just leave us! Who got shot?! I need to know!

Can you pleas continue this story I love it so much

Even if you don't update anymore. I just have to say: this fic is awesome! I would love to read more.

I dragged my feet on reading this for days because I didn't know how I'd feel about reading an AU with Temari being a slave, but dear god. I've hung on to every word in every chapter so far and I'm not even halfway through. This is one of my few favorites in my long history of reading fanfics. Your words leave the imagery in my head even after I tear myself away from my screen. 3

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I need to know what happened! I so appreciate the fact that even though Ino was scared, she wasnt about to do what the guy -Hidan i tjink- was asking, and for someone in her posistion, that is alot!

You have to continue! please!

I am in love with this DX

Temari holds a lot of faith in her brother, but i would too! I am desperate to see what happens next!

Yayyyyyyyyy Itachi! I wonder what Temari meant when she told him he wouldnt kill her. This has to be THE most intriguing Naruto ShikaTema story i have ever read so far! I am desperately in love with it! Now all we need is for Temari to tell Shikamaru she loves XD

The fact that all the charactets on the sme page but not at the same time is amazing XD

Oh my gosh! They did it! Shikamaru must be so thrilled! I just hope that Temari knows Kankiro cares X) I cant wait for more build up!

Awwwww, poor Shika. Yayyyyyyy, Sakura got a say! Choji will be journeying! Shikaku and Inoichi had the best moment XD I love 'em! The NejiTen scene i was NOT expecting! Kankuro is my BOY!

-sigh- i feel story for Kiba :( now all we need is for Shino, Lee and Sasuke along with Sai to appear and that'll be the whole gang XD

Hahahahhaha! Tenten was about to shot him! Sakura is the typical her, yelling and all XD Now i knew Temari could be a bit of a devil but damn! Poor Kiba and Naruto XD I am actually hoping for Hinata to stand up and say something you know :D

Hurahhh! My love Kanky-pants has arrived! :D

I am in love with how you are incorporating all the characters! I dont think ill be able to say that enough! The little history session ws nice and it cleared up some things in my mind :) This story is too perfect i just know ill cry when i finish it!

Omllll i am in love with this story! Every little detail is amazing! Not every character is all happy about the other's existence and it just makes for an even more intriguing story! I love it and i love you for makingv it!