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Fantastic fic though it was somewhat confusing at times and i had to reread to make sure i didn't miss something. After reading many tscc fanfics it gets so boring with the feeling of reading the same thing but this ones diffrent, a bit too fast paced but good non the less. I liked it and hope thats not the end of it.

This is a good story. I just wish there was more jameron and more to the story.

Not sure what I think of the end. Left us hanging as much as the show but I guess that's the point it's never over for them.

Chilling. Love the reveal.

No you killed her! I'm sad now. On to the next chapter.

Great action scene and twist. Keeping me on my toes.

Thanks for sharing

This chapter gave me shivers. Thanks for sharing.

So very intiging. So many questions and not many answers yet... I always thought Derek shot Jeese but that was my assumption.

I can't get over the wonderful tapestry you've woven for us. On to the next chapter.

Awesome start off to read chapter two.

Thanks for sharing.

The story was well written, but I really disliked John. Some of his lies were just unnecessary. I had the same problem with the show. The lies cause more problems than they solve, putting himself in unnecessary danger. There is no way that I would trust John. Way too many lies and secrets. Besides, I never understood his motivation. Did he want to get home? Find Cameron? I really lost interest in the story half way through due to these problems.

This is the best-written TtSCC story I've seen. Others read like a bad SyFy Channel budget movie; this one reads like a Hollywood blockbuster. I love how you use reoccuring characters from the series, as it fills out the future plot-line with recognizable landmarks. I appreciate the great effort you've taken to craft a plausible story (for certain values of plausible). Bravo!