Ohmygosh this is so beautiful. It hit me so hard - I legit teared up.

First of all, I think the way you used verses to separate every single part of this fic was really creative and effective. It gave a sense of anticipation as well as being impressed as to how well it fit when you re-read it.

I really liked the conversation between Annabeth and Chiron and I felt that it was pretty darned deep, especially for her age. Her meeting with Percy was really cute. And the way she waited for Percy to come for her because he's Percy, and he was always constant was so well written that it really hit me.

I also love how you wrote her emotions when Luke betrayed her - the short sentences and repetition did their job really well and it was really emotional.

Overall, you've done an amazing job. I'm not even surprised by the number of reviews this fic has. Good job!

Love how you incorporated the Bible verses in this story. It’s very unique. Those are some of my favorite verses. They tell a lot about love and Jesus.

This was stunning it was so beautiful and well said that I can't believe I haven't found it before. It's been ages since I've read your stuff and I can't wait to read more l
Loved the Virgil quote, and the verses, which worked excellently in contrast to one of my all time favourite couples. I could always go for those two :)
Thanks for writing something so touching, it really meant a lot to me.
Love,
Violet Sky

Wow.
That was so beautiful. :'')

Wow! This is amazing! YOU are amazing! I loved the way you portrayed Annabeth, and showed her inner struggle with herself. I love Percabeth! :D

Keep writing,
MidnightEevee :)

Amazing...It's a typical Annabeth debate; mind vs heart, logic vs love...obviously love won...3 cheers for Percabeth!

I love this!
It makes sense for Annabeth not to believe in love after she's been left and betrayed so many times. Luckily Percy will change that opinion.

Gotta love Annabeths logic in the second part :)

:) i like it keep 'em coming

Just so you know, I usually don't review stories, but yours is AMAZING! I've read it seven times over and I just wanted to tell you. :)

Wow, really liked it. Great!

It was a very nice story. I love it :)

I love it so much :) Especially in the last part where you wrote 'Love is Percy'. :D

Aww...i love annabeth and percy together...XD

I just loved this. It's well-written, perfectly built and screams sentimentality (it's a compliment).

I loved the Virgile's quote in the beginning and that's what pushed me to read your OS. Great use of it.

Fractals.

You use the language in such a beatiful way.

You have portrayed perfectly Annabeth's emotions, it's very realistic.

Congratulations!