You might as well made it an Edward and Bella story if that's the ending. Why'd you made it Jasper anyway?

wait isnt sibbling relationship thing not allowed have nothing against the story

I hate you, for making me cry.
I so hate you, for tearing my heart.
But at the same time,
I love you, for opening my eyes, to the reality of this dark, dark world.
I have never felt my eyes opened wider.
Thank you, for being a writer, and for existing.

TEAM JASPER 4EVA

Will master and bella have any kids PLZ answer.

Your story was mostly well written except for the Renee & Phil chapters. If they were totally replaced with a new situation, it would be an exceptional story for FF. It was exciting to the end & I can picture it as a thrilling movie. You have a great talent & I hope you profit from it. 4.5/5

I think I'm going to stop reading here. Your story just isn't believable, which makes it hard to follow. That said, it is hot! So thanks for sharing.

This story is so sad. I was hoping for HEA

This is so beautiful

This story was the coolest thing I've read. I call this a true Drama and Romance. Congratulations for your story, I fell in love.

Such a heartbreaking tragedy. Normally I wouldnt read a fic without a ExB HEA, but I'm so glad I gave this one a chance.

This fanfic reminds me of the song partners in crime

You beautiful, horrible person. I’m crying. You’re story broke my heart. I love it. Thank you for taking your time to write such a masterpiece.

Holy shit... I remember reading this story years ago when it was still being written but I had stopped after the first chapter or second chapter when I took a break from FanFiction. This story was so dark and I didn’t see this situation ending well for them when they ran. But this was to a whole new level. And I loved it. There was no magical fairy tail ending. It was so raw and emotional and realistic that I couldn’t help but engross myself into it. The ending was perfect and adding Emmett at the end to talk about Bella and Jasper dying was a cherry on top. Then, in the end, the world still looks at Jasper and Bella as brutal killers. It is so realistic, and I loved it. It took me a day to read this because I took so much time to read through it, and I can honestly say this is probably the best of dark fics on this website. It was just so raw and emotional and perfect. I know I am repeating myself, but I really am just at a loss for words to really describe what I am feeling right now other than shock and understanding. Their love for one another in the end was beautiful and I truly cannot explain how amazed I am right now.

I can’t believe I’m just reading this story! Once I started, I could not put it down. So violent, so sad and so addictive! I really didn’t like the ending, but I also see why you ended this way! Great story!