Reviews for Unexpected
Blu chapter 6 . 4/20
Yo imagine waiting for an update on a fic from ten years ago... like who would do that lmao

Me. It’s me. I would do that. I am currently doing that. please put me out of my misery
StarryFaeCat chapter 6 . 12/9/2019
Mmm, the little bit I do recall of Sam from the books was that he's hot and tall. Wooot. But that's harsh mannnn. Strong words, :(, but didn't he say a werewolf could, uh... cease themselves from existence on this plane of life if they remained apart from their imprintee(imprinted)? And, well, dayum, what just? Happened? Jake? YOU GOOD, BRO? But, yeaaaa, this was something! :D Thanks authorrrrr. Don't worry, pitchforks are sooooo last year. Everyone knows that paintball guns are the new in for hunts~
StarryFaeCat chapter 5 . 12/9/2019
Hmmm, I enjoy Edward's POV. Hearing his opinions on Jacob's thoughts are funny~ Though, woooow. I know you warned me(us), but that was a bit of a slap. Ahhhhh, angssssst. Hmphhhh, hope they have a reason, :(
StarryFaeCat chapter 4 . 12/9/2019
*muffled sobbing* Holy CRUCIBLE, I just about had a mild chest stutter. That was... alarming to say the least. I knew this has six chapters, but it didn't stop me from blanching. Booo, author, crueeel~ But still, good job, that hit me good. Congratulations are in order. It's not really up to me, and you might be over this, but take time to get rid of the crud on your serving platter before working on the story. Prioritize you first, story second. Also, don't run, I can sprint like a freaking vamp. Not threatening, though~ Bye-byeeeee, 3
StarryFaeCat chapter 3 . 12/9/2019
Well, ya see, percussionists can always slam down that perfect rhythm, so y'know... ;) Not that I'm implying anything, but I am. Also, like, hi I'm Edward, a thousand something something years old. I'm a monster who hurts people without meaning to and I don't think people are cute because that's not my thing. I don't deserve anyone but I also will flirt and be very sweet to a certain someone, bleh, bleh, bleh- Yeahhh, I'm gonna stop there. I knoooow I'm later, but happy Fourth! Keep up the lovely work~
StarryFaeCat chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
Oh my gods, anything for the cookies. Bruhhh, imagine dating someone who can read your mind AND smell when you blush. I don't think I would sURVIVE. But still, great storrrry~ Also, DANNNG, that one waitress wa .
StarryFaeCat chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
Please don't let a puppy get kicked by the Volturi. Wow. This is the good stuff. Like, ahhh, grammar, that's the thinnng~ Also, I love Esme so much, she's the best mom. Here's the funny thing, I actually didn't like the Twilight series much, I just felt like looking up some Jacob Black/Edward Cullen, and I found this. Also, if you don't mind my prying, what was the title of the Jake/Edward fic that inspired this? I'd love to read it if you have a link.
purplepandagirl chapter 6 . 12/8/2019
update
Michael Cullen chapter 1 . 10/26/2019
OML THIS IS A-MAZ-ING DARLING! Sorry Strictly Come Dancing... heh
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2019
nice!
JacobsNindo chapter 6 . 4/1/2019
It's weird because your basically combining the first two movies/books together but just quickening the pace for the werewolve development...the no mads weren't being challenged so it's like their staying in forks and then Jake cut him self causing Edward to leave and now Jake most likely being attacked in the meadow, is it just me or does same come off as having slight feelings for Jake it could just be that older brother vibe to look after him and I'm reading to much into but he thinks about him way to much lol. so much for an update...as oddly as it sounds I feel like their always wasn't enough angst with Jacob and Edward they both seemed so out of character and so happy and swoony which isn't exactly their personalities. so that was sort of a good and bad thing but ehh..I prefer it when Edward and Jake shipping stories has them violent towards one another first and then ease in to the mosshy stuff it feels more organic that way and realistic.
Arte con la voz chapter 6 . 3/31/2019
Gosh! This is so damn frustrating!, I've just noticed when was the last time this was updated and right when it began to get more interesting.
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384247 chapter 6 . 2/7/2019
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leishalovebooks chapter 6 . 2/6/2019
Please update soon I love this story so far
jones chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
plz don't get the Volturi to kick the puppy plz
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