It was very enjoyable to read!

ah, so perfect! excellent work, really ! :)

Very nice. I liked the revelation of Ashura happening just at that moment when Fai was saved from the battle only to be plunged into the ice. The last lines were great. :D

this one was good. not boring, and the end is simply perfect, not being too fluff and all, but still showing something really sweet and precious.

Aw! This was great! I really love the way Kuro was desperate to get Fai warm and then ending with what's he to you? I don't know. You would risk your life for him? Absolutely! . Perfect ending! Thank you! :)

Unnn~ I love Kurogane's immediate reaction to Fai in peril. I would love to read more fics of their time in Yama, if they were as cute as this one...

"What is he to you?"

Kurogane wrapped still-cold fingers around the glass, "I don't know."

"But you'd risk your life for him?"

"Absolutely."

...

I love it :)

awwwww, this one is just love! Kurogane proves time and time again that he will save his Fai, although he doesn't know what Fai meant to him. _ His instinct to save Fai is amazing! I would like to call it love that get Kurogane to save Fai every time. Hahaha. Just love that scene where Kurogane get away from Fai once he realized that they both were naked. Kurogane is just being shy. I am sure that he would love to stay in Fai's embrace a bit longer, ne? _~ Kurogane and Fai are too damn adorable together! Just love it!

I love this. Short and sweet with just a hint of what's to come in their relationship. Fabulous job. ;)

Aw! That is so Kuro!
Awesome one shot. I hope your friend you don't know the username of gets to read it and loves it as much as I did!

~IamZ12NV

Woohoo, KuroFai in Yama! . I just adore this world. “But you’d risk your life for him?” “Absolutely.” Aww, that's love alright :)

I like this. :)

ne! will it continue?

coz i loved it! i love them!

Aw that was cute!

This was such an automatic favourite. How could it not? I loved it, especially the ending. _

Criticism:

Nothing really.

I don't like the way you form your paragraphs, but that is a question of writing style, not grammatical error.