These Memo Stories crack me up! You write them really well! I was not expecting the sudden twist when Kirk suddenly says about Scott and McCoy avoiding him...and it continues on from there into a new event. Good job. Laughed at the ending.

Using the inventory correspondences as set up for the story was a clever idea. It was fun seeing where it went from there and how.

wonderful! great fun. more please, and pronto.

Awwwww. It just gets CUTER with every message! But I would not have been able to stop laughing of those messages had gone awry, say, to McCoy or Scotty ;)

Thank you though!

Aza
xx

lol! love it!

Hehe, I was wondering why Jim had Spock doing inventory. Very nice.

Aww, this whole story was too sweet and well done!

Beautiful!

i love the memo series. love, love love. flawlessly written , interesting and amusing while still being about business (well, mostly) . customs, standard practices, and regulations onboard are fascinating to read about. This fic has NOT gotten so much as 1/10 of the reviews it deserves. Keep up the excellent work!

~moviesaremagic

p.s. might i suggest also uploading this story to the Movie section, under star trek:2009? I think it would gather more interest in that sector of FF.

~moviesaremagic

I love this memo series. It's so fun.

This was pretty cute! I was a little disinterested at the start, but by the end of it I was smiling and laughing. The transition from smooth, orderly protocol to silly waff was VERY fluid and well done. I enjoyed this story!

Adorable. Seriously. Loved it.

Fun fun! I love the memos!

lol! This is uber cute! Loved it!

Love,

Lady Merlin

I loved your setup of the story, I enjoyed reading it.

I have to tell you that you just made my week!

I read this yesterday but didn't have time to review until now, because I was on a cheap laptop in a Minnesota hotel and homesick as hell. But I came on to check and see if you had anything new up that could wrench me from my misery, and you do! This is simply amazing :) Ever since I read A Matter of Perspective I've been hoping you'd write something else in this format. So be happy knowing you've gotten a smile out of your lonely-bored-and-far-from-home-on-a-Friday reader.

Loved this line, by the way: "I cannot imagine that we have 29 cases of decorations that previously belonged to members of our crew who have died. At least I hope not."

And this: "If you miss part of beta shift, I won’t report you. And since the whole ship is still scared of me, no one else will either. Convenient huh?"