And so after that they never saw each other again? Great ending, but what's implied made me kinda sad :(

I love this, especially the how Mello suggests coffee, despite their previous conversation. so lovely)

awesome! i loved how u kept the theme of flying throughout. it ad a nice arc, and i was satisfied wen i was done. lovely work. im surprised more people didnt review

Nice :V

You really gotta write more :D I promise I'll be waiting.

Like the idea, and I smiled when I read the ending. It was, well.. Amazing. Your stories are just too cute

Too cute! I was smiling all the way through. You put a whole new dimension to the MattMello relationship that it's absurd. :) Sky and lightning. :D The imagery was awesome.

It reminded me of a few things, such as the book "Heaven Eyes" by (I think) David Almond. Matt reminded me of Ikki of Air Gear, and even a little of myself. I love to run too, regardless of how bad I am at it.

As for tips for improvement... maybe you could reread this fic one more time? I spotted maybe... three errors, but they might have been accidental. Aside from those, though, it's a kick-ass story. Short but unforgettable. Great job. :)

Ahh, Matt. You write him perfectly. Nice work, keep it going. :D