I liked this story(joining Hinata and Naruto together after his return).
Since never updated take it as being complete.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Nice!

More NaruHina, please! :D

Damn fine piece of writing. I loved the reactions of Sakura and Ino at the news. Priceless! :]

Wow this one shot was awesome

The feels are very strong in this one...

very mushy

then the next day he gets crushed under a rock...damn iwa ninjas

Wow! Super one shot. I think that this would be so great to have something similar to this happen at the end of Naruto. I am a guy that has always thought that Naruto and Hinata would happen...since the first episode. Great writing!

hold on a second wile i go eat a bucket of nails

little gushy but very good the damn smile wouldn't leave my face at all keep up the good work

Wow.

I wish I'd noticed that you wrote this the first time I found it, that would've made it so much easier to find again.

Not usually being one for songfics this one caught me rather off guard as being something of very notable quality, that and I did have a bit of a loud giggle at the believe it line in the song at roughly 3 in the morning, good times there.

The only slight gripe i have is the very sudden revelations, but that is simply the nature of such works and besides, it is quite beautifully offset by the near flawless interactions throughout.

I must ask though, were there any other ideas for scenes being toyed with at the time? It would be nice to see what other directions this could've gone had the mood taken you to do so.

Drake

*drool* the best naruxhina romance ive ever read. I wish this would happen in the real story line and i wish you owned naruto. Ahah! Good job!

I can see why you wanted to fit this into your story. Very nice!

(I know that it's not much of a review, but I'm kinda brain dead right now... midterms and all. Just wanted to make sure you received some approval for your work, since you more than deserve it!)

Oh, on a side note, the video code you put into the story itself no longer works, as it links to a copy of the song on YouTube that was removed for copyright reasons. I'm attaching the link to the copy of the song, if you wanted to update it: it's also on YouTube: the code is j4y-RzVGrHg

Thank you again for sharing your work with us.

Jian

Does no one else think this song was just MADE for Naruto and the one he loves? I mean it's incredibly accurate, is it not?
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