Pleeeeeeeaaaaase! I am begging you to update and finish this! This is an absolute masterpiece and the best Altair fanfiction I have ever read! Please please update. If I have to get on my knees and beg for you to update and finish it I will. If you have to finish the other story you are writing before you finish this then ok, I'll even read it as i like mass effect, but please let us know if your gonna update this, its an absolute masterpiece. I will seriously cry if you choose not too.

Please finish your story. This is an absolute masterpiece and puts all others to shame.

I'm absolutely in love with this story.

Out of all the chapters this one has to be, by far, my absolute favorite. Why? Two words. That ending! *Squeals happily* It begins! And I do love the sly use of symbolism there, very clever!

I particularly like how you pay special attention to Altair's facial expressions and the tiny nuances within, since he's such a stoic guy all around. It's very in-character of him and of you to write him so.

I am growing VERY attached in fact to your characterization of Altair! You have a knack, a talent, a solid grasp on his personality and your writing seems to bring him to life in a very realistic light.

He's not just a character, he's a complicated man with a generous side of arrogance (though it is kinda warranted), and a side of scary, intimidating Basilisk-ness. Lol! Which I approve of!

You have written a masterpiece here! And it amazes me how much research you seem to put into it. Love the Tidbits Corner. Very insightful.

me: oh look! this looks like a realistic approach...
Cassandra: takes out kris blades.
me: Never mind.

Hi!
I love this story, I found it yesterday and I already read all of the chapters that you posted. I'm sad that you decided not to finish the story, this was one of the best fan fictions that I have read in a long time. I was looking forward to see what was going to happen to Sandy and Altair, but I understand why you might want to stop writing the story. I just wanted to let you know how much I love it!

When you described Antonio, I thought of Spain (also named Antonio) from Hetalia! Just his personality and his facial features made me think of him, and of could what he would have done in this situation! Awesome story so far!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! So subtle, so steamy! I just-! Seriously if Chaos Theory was a pillow I'd hug the shit outta it... every day... till I died. That's how much I love this story! :333

"I traveled eight hundred eighteen years into my past"
Are you fucking sers?

When I grow tired of shallow plots, dull OC's, and badly written stories that make me question my liking for Assassin's Creed I always come back to Chaos Theory.

The first fic. The best AC fanfiction out there. This story is like a safe haven for my AC faith and where I can hide away from all the mary sues and OOC characters. *Shivers*

My honest, honest opinion: there will never be a fanfic with a better grasp, a better characterization of Altair than this one. I like to see someone claim to try to write him better than this; in my mind it's not possible.

Chaos Theory will forever hold a special place in my heart...

Love reading it still, that will probably never change. Lol!

I cannot fathom on how phenominal this story is. There we go- I tried to put my feelings into words xD. I know that you may not update for a long while, or simply not at all. I just want to let you know that I enjoyed it.

Hi there!
I've just finished all the chapter you've put up and this thing is so freaking great! It rare to find such a deeply developed story WITH historically accurate facts which is an awesome bonus.
But now I have the worst book hangover in a long time so pleeeeease can you just tell me what was suppose to happen? Who was George? What is a fallen? Did she ever get home or did you change who married Altair? Did Maria marry Robert? What was Robert thinking in that last part when he was smiling? I swear I am not trying to steal your story or anything but I really need to know so I can move on!
Also! Where can I find your original work? If you post anything like that anywhere else that is.
MvH
(With kind regards)
MarinuDesu

Love this story! Very sad you've decided to stop this. Noticed on your profile that you've had previous stories that you've removed. Pleeease bring them back up! It's so hard for me to find such in-depth and detailed stories like yours, I'm sure I'd also love your older stuff too. :)

Okay so you might dislike Ezio but read Irony of Eden it's an AC Fic here on this website and that story will help change your mind also watch some YouTube tribute Ezio videos I grantee that you will love it and will come back to writing this beatufil fanfic and satisfy us lonely mortals please please please please please please please please please please we need not good awesome spectacular AC Fics expiscally good character development and in character canon things please please please please please please come back.?!

Please update please I love your story just come back to this brilliantly written story.