I really liked this story. The lemony bits, as you called them :) were written well. I would love to read more about these two. They definitely seem like soul mates and I think you could write a nice little story about their romance. Good luck with all your writing! I have enjoyed every story of yours I have read so far.

i really loved reading this ... and i would love to read beyond the point you left off from

just loved it...:)

Enjoyed! :)

I would love a story following this one. BTW it was a great story.

really enjoyed this, went to vote for this as second choice but you can only register your vote once.

Loved this one-shot. It was awesome for a first and the lemony bits were excellent. I'm glad you stuck with it and continued to write.

I really enjoyed this and would love to see it continued!

So very sweet. Thanks for sharing.

I really really loved this story of yours. I am a useless reviewer as i never know what to say.

so thank you for your story.

That was really good! I liked it. It was sweet and hot. Hahah. XD Anyway, you did a great job with this story.

Have a wonderful day!

-Dazzle.

that was rly good

I defintely think the story has potential to continue. I will head back and read Edward's POV. I understand the first fic fear. :) I was nearly hyperventilating when I hit the final button to put mine up.

Nicely written. And I can't wait to read your other stuff. Keep up the good work!

Hi a nice piece of work.I like it!Have any intention of continuing this?I'll put you on my alert if you would.

Keep writing! m_m