Woe, great one shot here. Gats quite steamy, but the raw emotions underlying it are quite powerful. And it's a very different take on what could have happened at the end of season 2. Very well written and worth a read.

Excellent

Very good... maybe a bit too many breaks in it but very good.

Probably how season 3 would have really started. Well done.

Wow, umm I think I need a cigarette after reading this and I don't even smoke ;). Great job. Thanks for writing it and keep up the good work.

I absolutely loved it!:)

I really liked this one... actually a scenario you could see happening... good job.

I liked Chuck's resolve and determination in the first part. Good job with Sarah's hesitation and training keeping her from really opening up to him.

Oh My Gosh, very,very good. Thank you for the story, really amazing and well written, What I liked the most, is that Sarah and Chuck remained the same, you didn't change the characters main characteristics to fit the adult scenes. Very good. Congrats.

That was amazing. It was all you ever want from a Chara love scene. I am glad Chuck had the resolve to break through her walls. So like Sarah to wait until Chuck is asleep to share her heart. Someday you will hear those words Chuck.

You could definately do a series of one shots off of this.

This is what all CHARAH fans hope to happen in season 3! This was very well written, I love how they both took turns pleasuring each other, and I'm glad that sarah didnt totally freak out after he told her he loved her. I hope that subconsciously he heard her say I love you too, thanks for a new fanfic:)!

wow, that was so unbelievably well written.

one of the best Charah lemons ive read.

please, oh, please. write more chapters!

great job. keep em coming

That was great a great story. Thank you. More chapters would be awesome.