Ed 2 months into English: being understandable
Me 3 yrs into french: Uh... Bonjour baguette...?

I've had this favorited for years, but i don't think i've reviewed. I love the german accent; it's a nice touch and makes for an amazing story.

While the ending wasn't on par with the rest of the story, I believe that it was very well written and intriguing. I wish we could have had more on what happened between Ed and the others after the battle of Hogwarts, as well as the unsettling reaction he would have had when reality hit. I liked the relationships that were written as well as the language barrier that was developed.

I say a job well done, wish there was more, like an extension explaining what happens next, but all in all, great story, eight out of ten, would recommend...and I am hard to please

WHAT HAPPENED TO HARRY?! DID HE REALLY DIE?! :O

Okay. I can’t read this anymore. I’m sure the story is great but reading the accent and him mixing the languages is just too horrible. No bilingual person would ever talk like that. This story is from 2009 so you probably won’t be reading this anyway but If you ever want to rewrite this story I would gladly help with the German parts.

It is Fräulein not Frauline

The German in this story hurts me. They are a few mistakes but the worst part is the way Ed mixes English and German. I know in this story Ed is not supposed to be fluent but you can’t tell me that Ed doesn’t know what Ja in English is. And Ed calling McGonnagall "gnädige Frau" is just awful. That’s like calling her "lovely lady" in english. Just calling her ma’am would have been enough.

I liked this fic very much 3

Still enjoying this fic, it's awesome. I came across another typo btw, and this time had to read thrice to actually figure it out: you wrote "mish" where you intended to write "mich", but where the form "ich" would be more appropriate.

Edwards incredulity at the idea of Mustang being desirable is golden 3

I am loving your fic and the occasional German word thrown in. One thing though, you are misspelling the German word for pumpkin: it's Kürbis. Not krübis.

That was probably the best HP/FMA crossover I’ve ever read. I love the way you interacted with the cannon of both stories, you integrated them in a way that worked really well and without being expected or boring. And the dialogue was pretty great. Overall that was awesome.

Loved this fic!

A little rushed but was is messy so all's good (: I haven't read many fanfics that reached deathly hallows so this was a really nice change. Ed is a human weapon alright.

Btw I didn't catch all the details in the original HP so who was the rat among the hogwarts ppl and who was the spy in Voldemort's team? Snape?

I accidently read burgerkrieg as burger king

I loved this story! I’ve been bingeing FMA and HP crossovers and I gotta say this was one of the better ones. The reason for Ed being there was solid. Other characters outside of FMA were understandably thrown by an 18 year old being a high ranking military officer. I really enjoyed how the characters interacted. The only thing I didn’t love was the ending. It felt really abrupt. The change in tone really could’ve worked if you had given more detail. Yes, I can assume what happened because I know Harry Potter, but there was very little info about the aftermath on a personal level.

On the one hand I get it. Flashing away right after that moment makes sense. I just really would’ve appreciated more after that. Idk what, just more. The ending was very abrupt and left me wanting more.

Don’t get me wrong, I love this story! Idk if you’ll even read this seeing as it’s from years ago, but I had to leave a review. Your characterization was very consistent. I really appreciated Tonks and Ed’s relationship. I think it added a lot to the story. Which was a beautiful story.