The account of bella's thoughts and actions are randomly switching between first and third person and it's very disorienting

wow I know how to baste eggs! all this time I just thought adding water to steam the slime cooked was easier than trying to flip the egg and break the yoke. I never knew this was a technical way to cook eggs! lol

why did he just refer to himself as Cullen when it's been Masen throughout?

I just wanted you to know that I just finished reading this, and loved every word! Thank you for posting this, and finishing it...no matter how long it took!
I hope all is well with you!
Jen

By far, my favorite line is “Take the notebook, my pretty.”

Just thinking about Edwards uncut penis is grossing me out a little. Why did you have to go and give him a ugly penis?

This is rape. Bella raped Edward. He did not provide consent. There is so much toxic masculinity and sexism in the story but I let it go cause it’s just fanfiction. But this is disgusting. I’m disgusted. Stop normalizing the idea that women can’t rape men.

I just love these two! Especially Bella

I loved this story! It was so much better even than I expected. Their emotional and physical journeys were so interesting (and hot). Their internal dialogues were so cute. I just loved how they figured everything out. It had nice little surprises and points they had to deal with without getting actually angsty. Just loved it.

A reading that contains everything.
Hot Lemons and humor that make you dubbed over, and a really good storyline

lol, "it's sex not a rocket launch." right dou, real talk.

I don't want to, cuz I LOVED this story, but I have to second that statement- that first time did seem quite rapey

So are we all gonna pretend Bella didn't just rape Edward?

thanks so much for completing this AMAZINGLY! AWESOME! story for us ;D

I really loved this story!