That was ridiculously over the top.

Logan was born in 1832, not 1834.

Isn't Emma, Kayla Silverfox's younger sister?

I'm pretty sure things were chill between them at the end of X-Men Origins: Wolverine.

She keeps mentioning her scars but considering just how old Logan is and all the shit he’s been through, she should be more worried about his scars.

Since when is Storm immortal with super human strength and speed? She’s already powerful enough, give it a rest.

That last situation between storm and logan felt really forced.

Hello :)

I know this is an old story and I don't know whether you're still active but i still would like to give you credit for this amazing story!
If there are some mistakes in my sentence structure or somewhere else i'm sorry, i'm from germany...

First of all...wow. After reading your story twice i'm still speechless. The way you write is fantastic and i couldn't stop reading! You got all the characters just right and no matter what you do for work but please go to marvel!
This is... well it's a masterpiece. I've only read one so long and that's a german fanfiction of Black Widow and Hawkeye but this one here can definetly keep up with that.
I'm a writer myself but until i get as good as you are...well that probably will take time.

Alright, back to your story:
I know how difficult it can be to redescribe a scene but you nailed it in every way and still managed it to give it your own touch. The characters might belong not to you but they still carry your handwriting and everytime Ororo and Logan met, my smile just grew wider and wider. Their relationship is absolutely realistic and fantastic and whenether they teased each other or argued i grinned like a cheshire cat or groaned in frustration.
You made me addicted, now feel ashamed for writing a perfect story for my RoLoheart!
I've been searching for so long to find someone who loves RoLo and has the skill and the will to write a realistic fanfiction and here you are. Thank you!
You have no idea what that means to me, especially after they cut the kiss out of days of future past...
I also loved your own creations like the chapter between the movies, the way you brought in "new" characters like Tony, Emma or Betsy or the way you connected every movie to your story.
You also got so many plus points for being a Star Trek Fan, for prefering EmmaXScott over ScottXJean, for bringing Rogue and Gambit together and not Rogue and Iceman, for Betsy and Angel, for making Angel not look like a one-shot, for giving Pyro more credit, for patching the Phoenix Force, for making Betsy soooo rightful badass, for absolutely not messing up Emma but making me love her even more, for Jubilee, for Kitty,
for making Kurt speaking german (even though i hate german, i'm still a little happy when i can read something in german in a text written down in another language), for making Storm so awesome like she deserved to be, for Rogue and not giving up on her powers but getting Ms Marvels, for Tony Stark (because he's awesome) aaaaaaaand...
For, of course, bringing Logan and Storm together! I know, that's the center and sin of the story but still...yes i absoletly agree with you, there is no chemistry between Jean and Logan and even though i kinda hate Jean, i liked her in here because she was...nice.
Still, Jean would you like to leave Emma and Scott alone, look for someone who does not belong to another woman and get yourself a life or just STAY dead without somehow rebirthing?! That's annoying, thank you.

The only "negative" thing i could say is that i wish that Colossus and Mystique could have had a little more "Screentime" but honestly you've got so much in your story that was overwhelming, i think you couldn't give everyone the same attention
The way you described the fight scenes, especially the last fight between Phoenix and the X-men was just fan-freaking-tastic! How Storm unleashed her true potencial...wow. Epic.
I'm still al little confused about that chapter from Storm's point of view, but that's probably my fault, when i'm exited i use to jump over scentenses...

To say it finally... good job! Awesome work, you have earned my respect and i would say you belong to the most talented writers i've read so long. Please don't stop creating your masterpieces, i would enjoy reading much more of you :)
Thank you for this amazing story that i'll never forget! Thank you for making RoLo so real.
(I hope i dind't forget anything important...)

Your favorite X-Men pairings are also mine, i love the Mentalist too, yes there isn't any other movie as epic and awesome as Avengers and the Legend of Zelda Ocarina of time is my second favorite game ever :D and of course, raise your wands for Pokémon! (makes no sense, just always wanted to use that spell...er sentense, sorry)

Hopefully we'll get to read something from you again :)
I would love to.

Yours
Foxsquirrel

That was the best X-Men fanfiction I've ever read. It was honestly better than the movies. You must have been in love at some point in your life because how you wrote Logan and Ororo's relationship was very real. I love how you actually gave Ororo a character and this story has given me insight on how to better characterize both Logan and Ororo for future stories of my own. I especially loved how you incorporated Logan's enhanced senses into the story. Almost nobody does that unless the plot calls for it, but you wrote it as it should be: second nature to him. This is the longest fic I've ever read, but you kept my attention with your brilliant writing. Congratulations on a wonderful story!

This was an amazing Rolo story, probably the best one.

Thank you so much for writing this story, it is my canon. I could never understand why Logan would go for Jean when miss Ororo Munroe is standing there all gorgeous and single! You've given me everything I ever wanted form the X men franchise, so once again thank you :)

Awesome story!

This was freaking awesome! That battle between the goddesses was epic! So does this mean that Ororo still has the unlimited power unlocked or us she back the way she was?

Awesome chapter!

I wish this was how it went in the movie. Fantastic! And I'm glad she said the words first and apologized first. She owed him. RoLo!