interesting way to go

Nice short story.

I love this fanfic.

I love this fanfic.

that was the best naruhina story ive read

Nice this story was quite enjoyable!

Oh my gosh! I feel happy tears forming in my eyes :') Matt you're a GENIUS! :'D

You'll forgive me for the confusion but I thought this was going to be more than two chapters. Imagine my surprise when the story ended after just two chapters.

The drama in this tale was just as intense as the lemon involving Naruto and Hinata. I was just hopping mad that my boy Naruto was acting like a first class jerk to the lavender goddess just 'cause he had no idea what true love is. While I normally don't speak ill about the blond jinchuriki, I say that ass whooping he got from Lord Hiashi Hyuga was rightfully deserved.

Here's another thing I never thought I do: give props to that wicked witch of Konoha Sakura Haruno. Believe me I would love nothing more than to see the pink haired hoochie get a large purple dildo shoved up her rectum, but this time I have to give her credit for giving sage advice to Naruto about figuring out his feelings for the Hyuga heiress and finally confessing his love for the girl.

Other than the issues about the lack of proper spacing in between lines and no actual paragraphs to speak of I really enjoyed this story despite the fact that it's a few years old. But seriously Mr. Wilson you should indicate whether or not a story is completed that way people can R&R accordingly. By the way I heard you had a story involving Naruto and Konan on concerning an interrogation scenario and I was just wondering how do you access it on that sight seeing how I'm kinda having diffuculty doing so.

Until next time, SV33 out!

Hot damn if that wasn't one of the most passionate NaruHina lemons that I've ever read. Kinda find it funny how inclimate weather can bring two souls together in a union of hearts and flesh.

My only complaint with this fic is the lack of proper spacing between lines and the absence of paragraphs that sorta makes this look like a jumbled mess of words and sentences.

I did like the plot though and the resulting love scene that followed was not only sensual but tender and warmth giving at the same time. I found this fic by accident and I'm kinda glad that I did. I just hope this doesn't get left by the wayside like so many other fics and get a proper conclusion like it truly deserves!

Until next time, this is SV33 signing off!

Nice Story

Nice story loved it

Such a good short story.

That was awesome, a bit rushed at times but awesome. No woder the NaruHina Chronicles are so good!

Wow, Matt, great story! In only two chapters you covered so many different situations and then resolved the major problem in the plot in a creative and beautiful way. This is really a touching story. It was cool the way you worked in the concern of Hinata's younger sister Hanabi...and her action to try to help get Naruto and Hinata together. You are the master of the Naruhina genre:)

Holy crap i loved this story...

I read it while i worked and i just couldn't stop for a minute...

Nicely done!