i am crying

Hi, I just want to say that this story is good. But I wish it could've been longer or you could've written about the feelings or the way Hermione feels after a few days. Overall, the short story was amazing!

Aw! So sad, but so well written, I saw it happening in front of my eyes.

So sad!

That was beautiful and sad. I loved it. It made me cry a little. It's too bad no one knew about their relationship until it was too late. Great work!

Sad and sweet. It works though. Keep writing